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Blow Me (2022)
blow me blow me blow my mind
blow me blow me out of time
with your gentle breath caress
my bare skin...I must confess
I know you know what I feel
when exposed to your appeal
you know I know you feel too
something that is very new
sparks are flying all around
as our egos come unwound
electricity flows between
you and me...we're in a dream...
blow me blow me out of time
blow me blow me blow my mind
with your tongue, your lips and mine
blow me as we intertwine
fingers touching skin on skin
blow me as I enter in
the places within where you hide
blow me when I am inside
with your gentle breath caress
my bare skin...I must confess
I want you to blow my mind
as you blow me out of time
blow me blow me out of time
with your gentle breath caress
my bare skin...I must confess
I know you know what I feel
when exposed to your appeal
you know I know you feel too
something that is very new
sparks are flying all around
as our egos come unwound
electricity flows between
you and me...we're in a dream...
blow me blow me out of time
blow me blow me blow my mind
with your tongue, your lips and mine
blow me as we intertwine
fingers touching skin on skin
blow me as I enter in
the places within where you hide
blow me when I am inside
with your gentle breath caress
my bare skin...I must confess
I want you to blow my mind
as you blow me out of time
Published 26th Jul 2022
Author's Note
This a remake of an old poem which I enjoy reading out loud...best with headphones
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26th Jul 2022 12:12pm
To be pleased both physically and mentally.
Transported to another place where only two matter. Truly enjoyed the write sir.
Transported to another place where only two matter. Truly enjoyed the write sir.
7th Aug 2022 5:48am
7th Aug 2022 2:30am
Blowing someone's mind is the best feeling.
Bare skin and breath... caress...
Those sparks are what I need.
Fingers touching... Intertwined...
tongue to tongue.
And for a moment all the worries go away.
Weekends are hard for me right now.
I have so much to do.
And I so often cry because it's just so hard.
But these are the moment that get me through.
And this is beautiful.
Bare skin and breath... caress...
Those sparks are what I need.
Fingers touching... Intertwined...
tongue to tongue.
And for a moment all the worries go away.
Weekends are hard for me right now.
I have so much to do.
And I so often cry because it's just so hard.
But these are the moment that get me through.
And this is beautiful.
7th Aug 2022 5:50am
such a wonderfully poetic comment...it pleases me that you are pleased...every happiness Lawrence
