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Blow Me (2022)

blow me blow me blow my mind
blow me blow me out of time
with your gentle breath caress
my bare skin...I must confess

I know you know what I feel
when exposed to your appeal
you know I know you feel too
something that is very new

sparks are flying all around
as our egos come unwound
electricity flows between
you and me...we're in a dream...

blow me blow me out of time
blow me blow me blow my mind
with your tongue, your lips and mine
blow me as we intertwine

fingers touching skin on skin
blow me as I enter in
the places within where you hide
blow me when I am inside

with your gentle breath caress
my bare skin...I must confess
I want you to blow my mind
as you blow me out of time
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
Published
Author's Note
This a remake of an old poem which I enjoy reading out loud...best with headphones
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