deepundergroundpoetry.com
Defined In What Terms?
The euphoria of sliding in
with hope never deemed a sin
maybe a win win
so pleasant not needed is the gin
Not conditioned to night or day
for this erotica people do pray
as if there is a demon to slay
said to keep depression at bay
Drawn to the warmth so wet
ultimate feeling of no regret
when orgasms of both are met
throw away that dam safety net
Well documented as a mutual find
a mutual way to deal with a daily grind
body and soul working with mind
so much worse we can do with time….
with hope never deemed a sin
maybe a win win
so pleasant not needed is the gin
Not conditioned to night or day
for this erotica people do pray
as if there is a demon to slay
said to keep depression at bay
Drawn to the warmth so wet
ultimate feeling of no regret
when orgasms of both are met
throw away that dam safety net
Well documented as a mutual find
a mutual way to deal with a daily grind
body and soul working with mind
so much worse we can do with time….
Published 24th Jul 2022
Author's Note
Maybe the worst kind of poem- same rhyme scheme for the stanza. Or perhaps I am too ambitious.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 1
reading list entries 0
comments 4
reads 303
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Hoi hoi
Amen to that. Flawed or not flawed, is it so important?
At some pointthere’s no poem, and some time later there is one.
Magic if you ask me.
Love it that you shared it.
Kind regards, Gus
Amen to that. Flawed or not flawed, is it so important?
At some pointthere’s no poem, and some time later there is one.
Magic if you ask me.
Love it that you shared it.
Kind regards, Gus
24th Jul 2022 8:43am
24th Jul 2022 12:42pm
I still like that poem, it might not be stylistically perfect but it is enjoyable to read.
Favourite lines:
when orgasms of both are met
throw away that dam safety net [safety net - the now needless condom or contraceptive device?]
a mutual way to deal with a daily grind
body and soul working with mind [sex as a good way to round off a hard worked day]
Favourite lines:
when orgasms of both are met
throw away that dam safety net [safety net - the now needless condom or contraceptive device?]
a mutual way to deal with a daily grind
body and soul working with mind [sex as a good way to round off a hard worked day]
24th Jul 2022 4:41pm
I appreciate the concrete likes you point out! Gives me the impetus to possibly try again or even revise this one!
