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Darkly~inside me
sink your teeth inside
bleed me of the faith
inject me with visions so I can see
the wanton lust in me
writhing in pain distrust is my name
hindering the way
desolation in a spike to the vein
hold my heart in your hand
feel the pulsating greed inside
walk with me, the damned
shadows entertain doubt
I fear until I don't
beckoned closer I succumb to the energy
insidious need lingers
I faint inside the sacred vow
phantasmal darkness shivers to be this close
the urgency in me is so cold
it delivers the final blow
your love is just out of reach
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Re. Darkly~inside me
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21st Jul 2022 8:52pm
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21st Jul 2022 10:36pm
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21st Jul 2022 10:37pm
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21st Jul 2022 10:32pm
Wow.... as beautiful as it is dark. A tour de force. The truth is so naked here, it almost seems erotic. It draws you in and strips you bare, naked we stand in the dark.
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21st Jul 2022 10:38pm
thank you graciously dearest Shaman for the love on this write...it's deeply felt 💕
Re. Darkly~inside me
22nd Jul 2022 1:03am
Ms. Unveiling,
This is one splendid sensation of a write. A reading list luv me luv understanding of mine.
This is one splendid sensation of a write. A reading list luv me luv understanding of mine.
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Re: Re. Darkly~inside me
22nd Jul 2022 1:58am
hello dearest Devon thank you graciously for the love here it's deeply appreciated 💕
Re: Re. Darkly~inside me
22nd Jul 2022 2:13am
U are welcome my dearest Crimsin ah muchly and honored to know💚💋🚿🛁🛳️🛁. U the 💣!
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22nd Jul 2022 4:36am
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22nd Jul 2022 4:02pm
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22nd Jul 2022 5:32pm
hello lovely one that's so beautiful to my heart...I don't what to say I'm feeling so deeply right now...you've always been beautiful to me even when I couldn't express it 💕
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31st Jul 2022 10:55pm
Crimsin, your dark writes always bring something extra to the poetical table.
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Re: Re. Darkly~inside me
1st Aug 2022 00:17am
thank you graciously dearest Wally you know when I started that was kind of what I was known for...for some reason I scaled the darkness back in my writes... I guess influenced by the feel of the place...I deeply cherish your visits 💕