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crave
your lips burn into mine and stole my breath away
I keen into your absence feeling the void
my soul touch yours and that was it
I know what it is crave and not be sated
I would forever hunger you
on my threshold of sin writhe
my feelings to be cherished but never returned
it hurt to ache this bad with a feeling
down deep where no one has been
I see your eyes lock with mine
a challenge to go no further
still I trespass
lingering too long where I shouldn't
promises made in the dark
are smoke in the light
a taste of the emptiness within
Published 18th Jul 2022
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19th Jul 2022 8:02pm
To take someone's breath away so that they must breathe through you is an incredible experience. One that burns lips and consumes all the oxygen. It makes him ravenous for you to feel those sins writhe. But when your feelings are not returned you ache needing that oxygen so badly. There is so much desire down deep and when someone goes there you always need it. So many promises are made in the dark in order to satisfy those desires but they run much deeper than that, which can leave an emptiness inside that needs to be filled. Always searching.
20th Jul 2022 1:47am
hello beautiful Kristina you take my breath away when you comment lovely lady...with you understanding and honesty you always surprise me in a good way leaving not quite sure what to say and that doesn't happen with me often... thank you graciously for the love on my writes it's deeply felt 💕
31st Jul 2022 9:41pm
That last stanza is a poetic gem, what we say in the dark will come to light, but only then can we see it’s true form, but this notion is amazing
31st Jul 2022 9:45pm
hello dearest Wally I trust you are well...I love going over these older writes with you they always look different to me later...I am hyper focused when I write and don't always catch the subtleties... I love that you do this for me thank you ❤️
