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Lean on me
Pardon
those chaotically scrambled panic attacks, with signed papers from
your mind’s warden
Permit
obligations and after time-served, face those doubts which incarcerated you
Lean
on me because I will never abandon you, I will be waiting for you upon your release
be confused;
question yourself;
scream;
cry;
laugh;
Walk to the edge, I will support you
curl up in a ball;
think;
hide;
get away;
stay;
Be alone, or cling to me
run;
walk;
sleep;
define;
learn;
Say very little, or talk it out
The weight of your fears, and the pressure of your worries can lead you to self pity, know how that feels,
but
I will not let you stay there for long
Adhere
to the parole from your inner strength and once you are able to fly again, I will still be here, always here, your branch, your secure place
those chaotically scrambled panic attacks, with signed papers from
your mind’s warden
Permit
obligations and after time-served, face those doubts which incarcerated you
Lean
on me because I will never abandon you, I will be waiting for you upon your release
be confused;
question yourself;
scream;
cry;
laugh;
Walk to the edge, I will support you
curl up in a ball;
think;
hide;
get away;
stay;
Be alone, or cling to me
run;
walk;
sleep;
define;
learn;
Say very little, or talk it out
The weight of your fears, and the pressure of your worries can lead you to self pity, know how that feels,
but
I will not let you stay there for long
Adhere
to the parole from your inner strength and once you are able to fly again, I will still be here, always here, your branch, your secure place
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Re. Lean on me
17th Jul 2022 11:20pm
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17th Jul 2022 11:23pm
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17th Jul 2022 11:26pm
Re. Lean on me
17th Jul 2022 11:31pm
Hey beautiful goddess ;) It's really nice to see you. The painting is amazing as always, there is a lot going on there. And the depth of the expression of love, strength, and support is truly powerful and uplifting. If only everyone could find the person in life that makes them feel this way and vice versa then you can get through anything together. Although I also see the many other aspects like family and friends as well. It's a really beautiful message which warms the heart to read it. <3
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Kristina it is also so nice to see you 💞
So many great things going on and I’m looking forward to adding writing and art back again. Thank you for your beautiful comment! Having support and love is everything!
So many great things going on and I’m looking forward to adding writing and art back again. Thank you for your beautiful comment! Having support and love is everything!
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18th Jul 2022 00:52am
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18th Jul 2022 11:44am
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18th Jul 2022 1:40am
Loving the support and strength
Format and build up really works
Artwork is multifaceted, intricate and you ....
Phenomenal
BIG WELCOME BACK
BIG LIKE
Format and build up really works
Artwork is multifaceted, intricate and you ....
Phenomenal
BIG WELCOME BACK
BIG LIKE
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18th Jul 2022 11:46am
Re. Lean on me
18th Jul 2022 1:50am
The beauty of humanity is not in our perfection but in our flaws. To embrace these weaknesses with open arms is a loving tribute to humanity. A perfect poem about our imperfections.
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18th Jul 2022 11:58am
A loving tribute to humanity! Your comment conveys my intent. I very much appreciate it! Thank you! 💜
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18th Jul 2022 3:05am
Glad to see your back Nyx missed your poems and art as you are a work of art . Yes having support and love is everything !
Lean on me. xxx YWKISA💛💙
Lean on me. xxx YWKISA💛💙
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18th Jul 2022 12:17pm
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5th Aug 2022 4:11am
Dear NG,
Ugh! I just hit the wrong button and deleted my original comment. 😏
It was absolutely brilliant and now I can’t remember a word of it…damn it…well there isn’t a word wasted in this piece. It made me think I’d like to be the person in need of your gracious and stalwart support or the person who is the support. Fantastic write. I continue to be a huge fan of your artwork. It beautifully assists the poem. It’s awesome to see you back! H🌷
Ugh! I just hit the wrong button and deleted my original comment. 😏
It was absolutely brilliant and now I can’t remember a word of it…damn it…well there isn’t a word wasted in this piece. It made me think I’d like to be the person in need of your gracious and stalwart support or the person who is the support. Fantastic write. I continue to be a huge fan of your artwork. It beautifully assists the poem. It’s awesome to see you back! H🌷
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9th Aug 2022 10:34pm
Hello Honoria,
Well I am glad to get this comment version! I love it. And I’d be honored to be your support! Thank you so much for your support always! 💝
Well I am glad to get this comment version! I love it. And I’d be honored to be your support! Thank you so much for your support always! 💝
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1st Sep 2022 5:25pm
I've been browsing through your writes and they have a unique quality of construction and energy, outside the box, intelligent with wit and measured feeling. I'd guess you for a Gemini.
Hi I'm Daniel
Hi I'm Daniel
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1st Sep 2022 6:47pm
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Re. Lean on me
9th Jan 2023 4:11pm
👏 👏 👏!! Nice 👌 👍 absolutely endearing and compassionate with a lot of loyalty and respect for a person 👏 weather it be a lover, family or friend!! Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏 ❤ 💙
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9th Jan 2023 6:34pm
I love your comments, they too are endearing. Thank you! I love it when art or poetry makes a person feel uplifted.
I’m happy to know this poem resonated with you.
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I’m happy to know this poem resonated with you.
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Re. Lean on me
25th Jan 2023 11:35pm
I relate to this very much. I suffer with crippling OCD from debilitating anxiety. Panic attacks, hyperventilating, feeling like I cant swallow, feeling as if I cant breathe, fast heart rate, I used to shower 6 hours at a time, turning lights on and off for hours and hours at a time, continously checking things. You name it, I have it. This poem reminds me of myself. My mind wont let me be free. You wrote a good poem here.
Thank you,
Sedic J. Huxwell
Thank you,
Sedic J. Huxwell
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26th Jan 2023 00:15am
Thank you, Sedic
I am sorry about your OCD and the anxiety.
It does sound severe. I’m not in a position to give advice but since you wrote to me about it, I can offer this…
Look at the past year of your life or pick any year. Remind yourself, you made it through.
No matter what thoughts or fears you had, you made it through.
Acknowledging that, allow yourself a few minutes, to just not worry.
It’s great you are writing poetry and hopefully that provides some relief.
I am sorry about your OCD and the anxiety.
It does sound severe. I’m not in a position to give advice but since you wrote to me about it, I can offer this…
Look at the past year of your life or pick any year. Remind yourself, you made it through.
No matter what thoughts or fears you had, you made it through.
Acknowledging that, allow yourself a few minutes, to just not worry.
It’s great you are writing poetry and hopefully that provides some relief.
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26th Jan 2023 00:26am
Yes poetry has helped a lot. That and drawing. It takes my mind off of all my fears. Enjoy your night.
Thank you,
Sedic J. Huxwell
Thank you,
Sedic J. Huxwell
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4th Feb 2023 8:08pm
Wow, enjoyed that hugely. Inspirational words. Considered lay out. I love the line :Walk to the edge, I will support you , very provocative but in a I will catch you sort of way.... I think the intended would lean on you, fair play.
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Hello BITS!
I’m so happy you enjoyed this!
Yes, I agree, the intended would definitely lean on in. Thank you for reading and for your beautiful comment.
I’m so happy you enjoyed this!
Yes, I agree, the intended would definitely lean on in. Thank you for reading and for your beautiful comment.
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10th Mar 2024 7:15pm