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Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
No one will be safe and so I hope all other patrons have left because a young girl's desire knows no limits. I am the innocent virgin that plots to come always. It's the only thing I really think about as I stroke myself trying to understand myself. Why is it the only thing I think about? Does it matter? So many questions, but they only end with a gasp and a carpet that needs to be mopped up with paper towels. Every day I need to pleasure myself more because it's just not enough. It seems like I spend so much of my time in my room trying to get rid of this angst. Now I have my own personal trainer, with a real cock ready to train me right. And it seems like this moment is lasting an eternity waiting. Still I like it, the torture of a young body so eager to please. And his resistance is just sweet somehow, nothing good ever comes easy. And I will not come easy either, but I am sure I will come as it leaks out of me pre-maturely. I clench trying to hold my feelings in, oh this feeling of pain on my face expresses my angst so well. God damnit, this is not fair. I slip my hand in my shorts because I just cannot wait and as I gasp fingers pushing inside spreading my lips open, but they need something more than fingers. After all, fingers are a daily diving lesson, and I am the best swimmer on the team by far. And I think, is he my reader satisfied with my performance so far but I don't really care because I am just too horny to care. The look on his face is one of cumpitulation. And I know he will not be able to resist which is good since I would surely die otherwise.
I bend over slightly gasping and pushing my fingers in further while I look back gazing up at him. My eyes look innocent and maybe a little scared but they definitely say Fuck me. He says ''what are you doing?" he says sternly. I whisper, "Don't you like it?" and not giving him a chance to answer I just kneel down and rub my hand against his huge cock which is telling me he likes it very much. He tries to pull back but hesitates as I keep stroking up and down. Feeling how eager it is to let loose. My doe eyes still peering up at him as I slip my hand into his pants and touch him directly. He stops pulling back and lets my soft hand glide up and down. The other with fingers hooked inside me dripping. I know I am a little slut and I shouldn't do this to him but I know he wants it as bad as I do if that's possible. I just keep stroking with both hands... one in me, one on him. Still stroking is not enough, I take my wet fingers and pull down his pants so this throbbing member pops out in front of me. It's the biggest cock I have ever seen and I instantly know why he is a physical trainer. I take it in my hand, pursing my lips leaning forward I take him in. My tongue is eager to explore every ridge, every inch. I want to know what will truly be inside me soon. Everything about it so that as it pushes into my wet steamy femininity and my walls close in tighter, I can experience them again appreciating every nook and cranny, rippling through my soul. He is so conflicted, he wants to push me away but can't because a young girl with a cock in her mouth is simply irresistible, right?
I bend over slightly gasping and pushing my fingers in further while I look back gazing up at him. My eyes look innocent and maybe a little scared but they definitely say Fuck me. He says ''what are you doing?" he says sternly. I whisper, "Don't you like it?" and not giving him a chance to answer I just kneel down and rub my hand against his huge cock which is telling me he likes it very much. He tries to pull back but hesitates as I keep stroking up and down. Feeling how eager it is to let loose. My doe eyes still peering up at him as I slip my hand into his pants and touch him directly. He stops pulling back and lets my soft hand glide up and down. The other with fingers hooked inside me dripping. I know I am a little slut and I shouldn't do this to him but I know he wants it as bad as I do if that's possible. I just keep stroking with both hands... one in me, one on him. Still stroking is not enough, I take my wet fingers and pull down his pants so this throbbing member pops out in front of me. It's the biggest cock I have ever seen and I instantly know why he is a physical trainer. I take it in my hand, pursing my lips leaning forward I take him in. My tongue is eager to explore every ridge, every inch. I want to know what will truly be inside me soon. Everything about it so that as it pushes into my wet steamy femininity and my walls close in tighter, I can experience them again appreciating every nook and cranny, rippling through my soul. He is so conflicted, he wants to push me away but can't because a young girl with a cock in her mouth is simply irresistible, right?
Author's Note
This is exactly how it came out of my mind, no editing whatsoever so I hope it represents my thoughts well. I really appreciate any feedback. X
Part 3... of more. ;)
Part 3... of more. ;)
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Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
15th Jul 2022 9:28pm
Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
15th Jul 2022 9:51pm
I must say I had to look up Nobokvian, but I like that very much... I will definitely be delving into that further so thank you for that. Irresistible, I know... ;) There are some things that cannot be denied no matter how 'hard' you try. Some things that shouldn't be denied or maybe they should be. :p but I never really cared for taking a no for an answer much. :p Can always get a 'yes' in the end... many of them...
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
15th Jul 2022 10:17pm
I'm getting tired of all these Xina boners.
I thought this was going to be an instructional excerpt on plank exercises. Guess in some ways there is a plank for the young doe eyed virgin.
Guess I'll just have to suffer some more .....
10 boners award
BIG PLANK LIKE
I thought this was going to be an instructional excerpt on plank exercises. Guess in some ways there is a plank for the young doe eyed virgin.
Guess I'll just have to suffer some more .....
10 boners award
BIG PLANK LIKE
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
16th Jul 2022 00:53am
Planks, squats, presses, curls, sit ups... so many exercises to keep those boners strong. Young doe eyed girls are great for motivation. Really keep things up. Consistency is the most important, do it hard and do it a lot. And no one better for that. One look can make you want to do all sorts of really bad stuff. lol No instructional excerpts needed. If she doesn't know something I am sure you will be happy to help with that training, right? But you better believe it's all already been done in the mind fantasizing about anyone and anything. And possibly acting it out too, if not that workout is coming soon, and coming a lot. :p
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
15th Jul 2022 10:51pm
*sigh* this is so tantalizingly enthralling. Skipping words to read faster then rereading to feel all the desires. Brings up interesting thoughts about possessiveness and presumed ownership [by both men and women] masquerading as morality. The limits we place on ourselves that cripple our spirits are the true crimes against humanity, this is your light you've found in the night. You seduce, beguile, and blind with words, body, and mind. Deep spiritual hard on.
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16th Jul 2022 00:57am
I am here to tantalize and enthrall you with my witchcraft Shaman. rereading to feel all the desires, now that just gets me all excited. :p I am glad it is thought provoking because you are so right regarding possessiveness, and presumed ownership masquerading as morality and such. Oh, how many things do we think that we don't say... I know I think a lot of things, a lot. But my filter is broken so sometimes I say totally inappropriate stuff. lol Then it's like shit, there is that 'what the f' did she just say look. I will not be trained like a circus animal damnit. Actually, I will * nevermind *. Yes, true crimes against humanity indeed, I hate limits. I am innocent * cough * just like these very innocent thoughts. :p Deep spiritual orgasms are the best and that requires a deep spiritual hard on.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
16th Jul 2022 00:27am
Awesome getting hotter by the moment go you saucy minx. Absolutely love her boldness
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
16th Jul 2022 1:04am
Haha, I love being called saucy minx, that's super cute but in a really hot way. :p Some needs just make you very bold. lol What inhibitions... It's so damn exciting and thrilling to be bad, to let those thoughts take you over and make you bold. To see what you can away with, to see how far you can go but completely ignoring any obstacles or stops that get in the way. Not accepting no for an answer. Perhaps in the most innocent way. (yeah right). Getting bolder with more to come. Pun definitely intended.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
Xinaskirt,
Fulfilling and wonderful suspense. He wants to back away, but, can't is a very eye catching phrase. This why, I would only wish for that and she is also eager to enjoy his tasting of the days desires for him. This is again eye catching and eye popping to keep the story going within the eyes of the reader.
Fulfilling and wonderful suspense. He wants to back away, but, can't is a very eye catching phrase. This why, I would only wish for that and she is also eager to enjoy his tasting of the days desires for him. This is again eye catching and eye popping to keep the story going within the eyes of the reader.
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
16th Jul 2022 1:14am
More suspense to come. ;) Ah, you know he's not getting away. You just can't back away in the end. lol Not with an eager and ready hot young body in front of you. So many pheromones saying yes overriding any doubt and that very dirty smell of needing sex so badly while still smelling clean and fresh. lol I love that I have caught your eye with this one Birchel. The story is not done. ;) I really appreciate you stopping in to keep up with me and share your thoughts. I love that. :)
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16th Jul 2022 1:39am
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
16th Jul 2022 5:12am
Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
16th Jul 2022 2:08pm
I am all about inspiring people to go to the gym. ;) It's super important to stay fit and it's always great to have someone to work out with, to work out... Always the best motivation to stay fit in my opinion. And work out to exhaustion, it's wonderful for your stamina. Will be heading out to the gym in a little bit. :) And no doubt I will have many thoughts... Thanks so much for stopping in for a workout with me and giving me your thoughts. I really appreciate it a lot.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
16th Jul 2022 3:31pm
With the state of things currently we're kinda hesitant commenting on piece where women refer to themselves as you and their ages are undefine. Some don't care not realizing a fourteen or fifteen year old can write poetry. But that being said if this is a young adult female, emphasis on female, then yes this entire series has been hot. It is really hard to keep a lady from getting what she wants, it's been pretty much documented that men are the weaker of the sexes when it comes lust or giving in to sex. At our age we've gotten mad and held out on a lot of things but never the sex. There are some jobs not for every man gynecologists and sports trainer at a gym with females rank high on the list. It's so hard to say no when you've dreamed about how it would o down. Tight one Lil X
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
16th Jul 2022 4:02pm
I understand and I am glad you commented anyway. You certainly don't need to hesitate with me, I am an adult. :p I did not feel like an age needed to be specified in relation to the writing. That's a mystery for the reader to decide based on their own thoughts, experiences, etc. It's definitely difficult to keep a lady from getting what she needs. ;) Perhaps that's true regarding the weaker sex. lol Some jobs can surely get a man in trouble real fast. And some inspire lust all too often don't they? Of both sexes... Love that you thought it was tight, and that it has been hot so far. ;)
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16th Jul 2022 4:46pm
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16th Jul 2022 10:32pm
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
17th Jul 2022 4:24am
Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
17th Jul 2022 4:49pm
I love being the gym, and I offer the best workout ever but it's very hard to keep up so expect a lot of reps to build that stamina. So yes, perhaps you need to look for a really exceptional gym to handle all of your needs and training. One that makes you want to keep coming back daily, keeps you coming period. ;)
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
17th Jul 2022 1:35pm
Need someone to spot you in real life ?
I always wonder about the woman behind the words ??
Enthralling write
I always wonder about the woman behind the words ??
Enthralling write
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
17th Jul 2022 4:51pm
Haha, I have a spotter at the moment. :p Always need a spotter; definitely keeps you motivated giving them a super intense workout always. The woman behind the words, oh god... yeah, that's about as far as I got in responding to that. lol I really love that you found it enthralling, if not I would definitely be sad because I want to continue... ;)
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
17th Jul 2022 3:46pm
I'm getting younger with each sentence! Stronger by the word. Healthier by the sweat pouring out.
Don't open the gate for a Taurus. It has too much momentum at any moment.
Don't open the gate for a Taurus. It has too much momentum at any moment.
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
17th Jul 2022 5:03pm
Hell yes! younger with each sentence and stronger by the word. Damn! I am good. Have to work up a sweat, love tasting those electrolytes just don't drop the weights; sometimes it's easy to get distracted. All kinds of things pouring out everywhere. So many parts getting a workout. :p The Taurus is always seeking Venus. She is the ruling planet for the Bull after all. Always looking to charge and get those horns wet. But Venus is just so magnetic, isn't she?
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
18th Jul 2022 7:25am
Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
18th Jul 2022 2:46pm
Oh yes! don't I know it. lol Some temptations are very hard to resist, aren't they? Pun intended. ;) A very hot young body eager to please is definitely one of those things. :p So very hot and ready for anything. So unwilling to take no for an answer. Determined to try and calm those hormones that only get stronger with every new experience... Feeling pretty worked up now. lol
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
18th Jul 2022 4:04pm
Well hey Nousheen, I love your beautiful smile. :) I hope this made you smile too. You have found your way somewhere, to me. :p I hope that is a good thing. lol Thanks you so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. ;)
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
18th Jul 2022 4:11pm
Ah now more and more is leaving the mind and coming to fruition. What would it be like if our every desire saw the light of day? I'm thinking it would be a mixture of ecstasy, and disappointment. Our minds conjure the, often times, unattainable so well and so vividly that if exposed to reality may not live up to the fantasy. We now have this fantasy to revisit as many times as we wish.
You've a real talent for erotic prose. Bravissima❣
You've a real talent for erotic prose. Bravissima❣
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
18th Jul 2022 4:19pm
Ah yes, things are really starting to come along now. ;) If every desire saw the light of day for me then... * nevermind, I get myself into enough trouble already * And that would get me in real trouble for sure. lol Perhaps, but let's focus on the ecstasy always. Fantasies are indeed very powerful and can be difficult to replicate but it sure is fun trying and keep trying until it lives up to expectations. Yes, come to the gym as often as you want. "You're a real talent for erotic prose" What a wonderful compliment, that means so much to me. Thank you.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
18th Jul 2022 8:46pm
As a trained professional, I wouldn't fall for this. Clearly you are trying to avoid your X-training exercises and instead have fun. Now Missy, get over to the tractor tire and flip it over a few times! 😮🤸♀️🚜😂
I'm off to take a cold shower. 🚿
I'm off to take a cold shower. 🚿
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
18th Jul 2022 9:07pm
You would totally fall for this Leo; I know you would be all in... lol I am just trying to get in some different types of exercises. Is that so wrong? * innocent look * One bat of the eye lashes and you are done. :p You know it and I know it... Flipping me over is way better than a tractor tire. lol Cold shower can come later. Way later... I do long workouts.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
20th Jul 2022 00:38am
Dear Xina,
You made a deep impact in this part of the story. The wild game starts now. Based on my experience, it started as flirt and then a tease and serious wild affair where sex and wild actions dominate the scene. The barriers of hesitation are scaled down. Lust and lewdness play a prominent role to get the best out of wild action. I love this twist. Keep up the spirit of fun and joy.
Hugs and kisses
KS
You made a deep impact in this part of the story. The wild game starts now. Based on my experience, it started as flirt and then a tease and serious wild affair where sex and wild actions dominate the scene. The barriers of hesitation are scaled down. Lust and lewdness play a prominent role to get the best out of wild action. I love this twist. Keep up the spirit of fun and joy.
Hugs and kisses
KS
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
20th Jul 2022 12:18pm
I love a deep impact, so I am glad you felt it. Oh yes! the game is definitely moving forward. And I think that's a good synopsis of things. Flirting and teasing is such a fun part of the process of getting to other things... ;) Breaking down any barriers or hesitations. Really happy you like the twist. Showing what it's like in a girl's mind. :p It's not just guys who have needs and can get what they want. ;) I am all about fun and joy, passion and sex, and other stuff. :p Many hugs and kisses to you too KS. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts with me. I really appreciate it.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
20th Jul 2022 1:57pm
There are times when throwing caution into the wind is the only way to at least minimize the urgency.
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20th Jul 2022 2:43pm
If anything can throw caution to the wind it's sex. It's one of the most powerful exchanges that exists in life. The most powerful need. I know that urgency well, where you will explode if you don't get it. Where you cannot function without it. And somehow everyone around can sense it. I suppose I give off strong signals. :p
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
22nd Jul 2022 3:12am
And so his masculinity is yours for the taking. You are his brash girl to fulfill his fantasy that burgeoned with every touch, your scent, and your curves. Each of your moans grasps him into a trance as you hypnotize his very manly soul so that his essence is yours to taste to own. And you are his nymph who serves his desire like a geisha on a mission to please her man. Such a gift you give him is equaled by his elicitation of your bud of truth that speaks of femininity out of control like a wildfire.
Hotness for you,
John
Hotness for you,
John
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
22nd Jul 2022 2:29pm
I need that masculinity fed to me. ;) Brash girl, I love that... Oh yes... with so many needs to be met. I always to be his fantasy, the only one he wants train over and over again. Remembering every touch, the scent of a young horny girl, following my curves in his mind. Always knowing how to hypnotize and entrance. Overcoming any resistance and inhibitions. Serving his desire while he serves mine. Femininity out of control, that's always dangerous. Insatiable need and desire to be filled. Yin must have yang to find balance. Out of balance is very dangerous indeed. ;)
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
4th Aug 2022 2:58am
nicely delivered fantasy XS
its good to know what is ticking in the gymrats' mind :)
how is your sis, KX going?
its good to know what is ticking in the gymrats' mind :)
how is your sis, KX going?
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
5th Aug 2022 00:21am
I love making fantasies a reality. You never quite know if it's fantasy or history. :p So much ticking in the gymrat's mind. So much I am not sure I can share. lol It's pretty perverted and filthy in there. Kx is still going despite all the attempts to kill her. It's sad there are people on a poetry site that want to use every tactic imaginable to harm someone. But there are a lot of sick people that have nothing better in there lives than to torment others and spread misery and hate. Thanks so much for being one of the good ones CI. I love that you came by to see me and share your thoughts with me. I love that.
Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
17th Aug 2022 9:01pm
Gym Girl,
She is a heat-seeking missile on the way to her target.
Shooting That bull's eye.
She is a heat-seeking missile on the way to her target.
Shooting That bull's eye.
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Re: Re. Little gym rat... Part 3 - No one will be safe
17th Aug 2022 9:20pm
Have you ever seen that girl at the gym that just made it so hard, to not get so hard? lol Especially when she bends over slow in front of you... Yeah she knows when the eyes are on her... assets. And what's not to like about that. :p I really love a good workout. And definitely love a heat seeking missile that finds his target. ;) There are definitely lots of exercises for that... Ah, the taste of sweat... and other stuff.
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17th Aug 2022 9:50pm
Don't get me started with sexy girls at the gym with skimpy outfits who don't want to be "looked at" by perverts.
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