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soft destroyer
hear the song
you sing
in little murmurs
to yourself
something about love
something about
your voice
giving credence to the thought
that i could die
right here
and be just fine
you sing
in little murmurs
to yourself
something about love
something about
your voice
giving credence to the thought
that i could die
right here
and be just fine
Published 10th Jul 2022
| Edited 18th Jul 2022
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11th Jul 2022 3:15am
16th Jul 2022 9:12pm
What a gorgeous little poem! I’ve read it half a dozen times and it just…dances. I keep substituting “here” for “there” for the sense of immediacy which is perhaps why you’ve written such a touching poem and I have not. She dooo rock!
18th Jul 2022 6:02am
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19th Jul 2022 2:30am
You romantic you, this is a beautiful ode to beauty and it has that kick in it that doesn’t intrude on my imaginings of beauty you guide the reader to form their own conclusions.
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23rd Jul 2022 2:31am
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26th Jul 2022 5:02am
Hoi hoi
I think it’s a very endearing, romantic piece.
Small words, big emotions.
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
I think it’s a very endearing, romantic piece.
Small words, big emotions.
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
5th Aug 2022 6:48pm
Hi Bryan:)
Love the title!!!!
It contrasts beautifully with the feelings
of love and death. You have quite the talent of
saying so much with a sprinkling of words:)
So well said!!!
Love the title!!!!
It contrasts beautifully with the feelings
of love and death. You have quite the talent of
saying so much with a sprinkling of words:)
So well said!!!
