dear victoria,

Hi Grae,how are you?    
    
This is a melancholic,rhythmical pen.    
It evokes an "OtherWorldly" atmosphere,when describing the feelings pertaining 2  this woman.    
  
Such bittersweetness,that's truly palpable.    
Touching,and intricate,in description.    
 The structured lines and spaces,for me,creates the distance that's between you both--- very effective!  
 
This puts me in mind of a relationship I was involved in. Where,I felt I couldn't reach my partner,due 2 the immense amount of pain they had experienced,rendering my partner,unwilling 2 share their Heart with me.  
Anyway,I digress-----  
   
This is an absolutely Wonderful and Superb poem.
Very moving and emotive.
A Joy 2 Read!
   
Thank you for sharing Grae.    
   
Take care.    
X

Loving an emotionally unavailable lover must have been quite the heartache. A special kind of hell.

Thank you for the compliments.

Hi Grade,
Hope all is well your end?

It was a pleasure 2 read.

Take care.
X

I am well. Thanks for asking

Bryan,  
Your pen, per usual leaves me profoundly moved.

The breadth of opportunities missed and the ache of loss reverberates long after reading; staying in my thoughts, where I become even more attached to the pain that was evoked.  

This work is so relatable, human and heartbreakingly beautiful.  

Some of the best read poetry I've come across...  

I feel grateful that you've entrusted us.  
Outstanding work  
🌹💙  
B  

Thank you very much

Hi Bryan:)

Ughhh. This just aches to me. Felt everything from
beginning to the last line. Man - hang in there amigo.
This goes beyond words.

Dear B,

You’ve expressed a sentiment shared by all who have a heart that’s been broken. The way you’ve formatted the poem makes for a read that flows uninterrupted. Beautiful, heartfelt and gut wrenching. H🌷

Thank you.

This is sad but beautiful.  I think there's always beauty to be found in loving relationships, even after they end. I love your use of colour. That's always a big thumbs up from me.

Why stop writing about them?  
Use that to feed your need for inspiration.  Because it worked here, this is a great write!  
Angst is an incredible motivator.  Don't bury it.  Turn it into fuel.
This is a great write!

I agree. I think emotions make for some of the best poetry. But I think writing about her is keeping her fresh in my thoughts. I'm not sure that it's a good thing to do. Thanks for the compliment.

I can understand your feelings which you have shared here..
beautifully woven..

💔 Peace

Ever a passenger to emotions. Thanks for reading. Cheers.