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A cat o nine tails
A soft stoke on her naked back
Creating hardly a mark
Another slightly harder
To tease and get her in the mood
Of pain to come
Nine tails never enough
Indeed nine time nine strokes
Needed for her to start to feel alive,
Engaged and entirely receptive.
Totally in the mood to receive more
And yet, much too proud to reveal her deepest urges
Isolating herself in her carapace
Loathing herself for such acceptance,
Such despicable needs.
Creating hardly a mark
Another slightly harder
To tease and get her in the mood
Of pain to come
Nine tails never enough
Indeed nine time nine strokes
Needed for her to start to feel alive,
Engaged and entirely receptive.
Totally in the mood to receive more
And yet, much too proud to reveal her deepest urges
Isolating herself in her carapace
Loathing herself for such acceptance,
Such despicable needs.
Published 10th Jul 2022
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10th Jul 2022 2:54am
It takes a lot of soul searching and introspective work to get to a place of willing and healthy submission. There will always be a kind of healing of some deep internal hurts that can entice some folks to gravitate to such proclivities, I get that. To me feeling shame is foreign, as I relish and derive only freedom and pure powerful satisfaction in submissive role play ... Although I'm sure there are those who have to exist in that space, to fulfill a need...
An incredibly powerful piece for me, Robert
I'm glad you shared it.
Great work
🌹 B
An incredibly powerful piece for me, Robert
I'm glad you shared it.
Great work
🌹 B
10th Jul 2022 3:22am
There are all kinds indeed. In a different but somewhat related field of submission, I am sure you have heard of some Cross Dressers.......who hate themselves because they feel they must cross dress. I do not understand. They refer to themselves as ''non-passable'' CDs. Shame is involved for sure. Kisses, Robert.
PS: You could come over, be submissive and be my maid for a week...........(OK: a guy can have fantasies!!)
PS: You could come over, be submissive and be my maid for a week...........(OK: a guy can have fantasies!!)
31st Jul 2022 8:46am
Some will say anxiety, other expectation.
Either way, it's a good write.
Well done.
Either way, it's a good write.
Well done.
31st Jul 2022 12:16pm
