Have a second drink on me...

Yes we read dude's piece earlier and hipped him to it being to freaking tight. We love the interweaving of the two pieces and that you could expend on it's beauty instead of taking away from it. We was able to step in there and weave a beautiful twin mirroring his piece. To tight Lady  

I knew you would be drawn the darkness wherever it pops up I_IS_ME. ;) I love that you could see the interweaving and tight coupling while adding to it rather than taking away from it. That's perfect. 'weave a beautiful twin mirroring' I really love how you said that. That's definitely how it felt.

Torture and death made seductive
Sick minds saying the things we all think
You have a talent for sexual mayhem and luxurious pain

You and Jay should write together, ultimate thrills and depraved underbelly sanctity

666

Anti-Khrist forever

BIG BLOODY LIKE

Seducing minds in the most evil ways. lol Creating so many dark fantasies, always darker still. So many sick minds, I live in sexual mayhem and pain. ;) I definitely do not claim to be good at collaborations, something either hits me like a ton of bricks or not but you never know, anything's possible. Love the BIG BLOODY LIKE. You know the Anti-Khrist is always lurking in the darkness so eager to share it.

You're depraved indifference to all things sexually wrong thrills me ..

Oh that's not indifference PS, that's pure excitement and thrills waiting to happen anytime, anywhere carrying those depraved thoughts around with me always. Just waiting to come out and play doing forbidden things in all the wrong places, and all the right ones too.

I'll take a go bag of exciting wrong
Extra mayo

Vampire love is hot.  Keep on writing.

I love everything to do with creatures of the night. I find inspiration in that world so easily. I suppose I just fit in with and embrace the darkness so well or it embraces me. I am glad you came by to get your fill of blood Francisco. I wasn't sure how many would want to join me in the extreme darkness. :p

I be there for you.  You got my vote.

This is awesome

I love awesome. :) I know you can appreciate the darkness Adagio, so if I could pull you in and hold you there for a moment then I am very happy with that. The light is just so bright and hard to look at... The darkness seeks to consume it always.

Psst, I actually like the taste of blood.  Always have. Lol.  Something primal about it.  
Like melted copper.  Without the metal poisoning!
There used to be a restaurant down here that if you ordered rare steak, they made you sign a waiver in case of illness.  I ate two on my first visit.  
My ex would say how disgusting it was to eat rare meat. But I'd say why, I like it when it fights back!  Lol.

Oh!  Your poem!  Sorry, I got a bit carnivorous there for a minute.  I love love the ending.  But I dunno about the dead body part, because then it's over.  Noooo

I love the taste of blood. :p (forget I said that) If I am biting your shoulder in the midst of well... you know... then you are definitely doing something right. lol Let's just call those love bites. Animal blood I am not so keen on. :p Medium steaks for me. My Mom always did well done so it took a while before I realized not to do that. Sign a waiver... I would be worried about their source of meat then. Stoney River is one of the best steak house's I have been to but The Capital Grille is great too. Decent number of locations in the south. I might fight back if you ate me but you would know you are doing something right. lol I have such a hard time getting my mind out of the gutter.  

Well that's the becoming a vampire part... so even dead it's never over then. I just need to keep that passionate blood on tap. ;)

Oh how I love the darkness inside you, absolutely love this. Dark, sensual, sexy
Oh so my sort of read well done gorgeous
Love and light
Ron xxx

I love learning this part of you Ron. That you love the darkness like I do and me as an extension of it too. ;) 'Dark, sensual, sexy' that is definitely how I felt about it. Wasn't sure who else would. lol I will have to give you some more darkness. I have a werewolf poem I never posted perhaps I will soon. It's extreme content. :p

I wait with baited breath
Love and light
Ron x

A poem about vampires will always get a like from me 😁
Wonderful darkness, friend.

So when are you going to write me a vampire poem DC? No pressure, ignore that pain pressing into your side. :p Vampires always get a like from me too. Stalking the night always, there is so much passion in the darkness. So happy you could join me there for a moment. ;)

A piece with both honesty and style; I like your reflection poems the best.

(I don't think much of your inspiration writer's screen name)

So many reflections I lose track, stuck in this carnival fun house. Some are distorted and others reflect the true images but I like feeling my way through regardless. Always touching things... :p Honesty and style, that's me Ted. ;) Just always be ready for the honesty. lol

(haha, I had nothing to do with that... :p)

You know how much I love pulling you into utter euphoria. :p Especially with vampires, infinite lust and darkness. That trance is my vampiric powers of persuasion telling you to... * nevermind, innocent look * So happy you could enjoy sharing in the darkness with me. It's always best when you can take someone with. ;)

another excellent writeup miss KX
this is like the evil dark converting light to darker than itself
absorbing her into perpetual pleasure and darkness
quite a scene!

'the evil dark converting light to darker than itself' absolutely. After all even the angels were drawn to the darkness and wanted to fornicate with mortal women. :p Women always causing trouble and eating apples and all that. lol I knew you could appreciate the scene in it's entirety, it is quite the scene to behold isn't it. ;)

Beautifully written

Hey there skwrites. I am so happy you stopped by and shared your thoughts with me. I love that you think it's beautifully written and that I could share it with you. You must like the darkness too. ;)

Your work is amazing...Im glad i stopped by...Please have a look at my work too, If you have time. And do recommend me poets here. Im new on this platform

Thanks you, that is such a beautiful compliment. I will definitely have a look soon. :)
Recommended is hard because there are so many great writers here but I will PM you.

sure. no problem. Have a nice day

I love your darkside.

I love your darkside too. ;) Everything is just so much more interesting in the dark isn't it. So happy I could take you there with me for a moment. More darkness to come, no doubt.

I started reading and wasn’t sure what to think and then I was totally drawn in!
The taste of blood is sexy, I love the thrill. Never gave it much thought before, but this poem makes me want to go bite someone, my someone:)

We are going to get along famously. :p I love encouraging anything that involves drinking blood or clawing and biting. lol I suppose I was born a creature of night. But I love that you were inspired to go bite someone, I feel like my work is done in that regard. I know if you are biting someone they are doing something right. And that's just great. ;) You go get'em...

Tantalizing is a word I really love so much, but not as much as pulling someone into the sexy world of undead bloodlust or being taken there. ;) I really hate it when the darkness goes hungry. I think it should be fed and fed well sating that burning passion is the best objective in life and death... Casting an eerie glow where the shadows dance. The story is never over, death is a new beginning. ;)

Eternity and the absence of light dominate my thoughts about this poem.

The absence of light can be expressed so many ways... So many fun and passionate ways that keeps an eternity thrilling. Every taboo and obscenity needs to be fully explored over and over.. And then make some new ones, there is no limit to what a filthy mind can dream up is there? I love the night... Being a creature of night pushing those boundaries that exist outside the light. Hidden from mundane and bashful eyes.

Who knows what lies in the shadows?

I always love finding out. The dark has my senses on overdrive... The light too. ;) But finding your way in the dark is so thrilling and exciting. Getting lost in dangerous places or being the danger. :p Feeling someone else's blood throbbing in my core, a transfusion of sexual energy that I always need so much... Making the blood flow until it hurts and the only option is to empty in someone and try to bring the blood pressure to a manageable level. But no, 'It's not that easy'... ;) because feeling that strong heart beat in me is something I must have.

Is there a Happy Hour for those Bloody Kristina's ?
I'm in the mood for some bloody trouble, might as well be 1/2 price

It's always happy hour with Bloody Kristina's. The trouble comes with every sip as you get more and more intoxicated. Needing it more and more... Until you just cannot handle any more trouble and have to take a break. ;) But there is always more trouble to be had. Thanks for stopping by for happy hour, I love the visit.

Dear K,

“Now writing the darkness with another as evil as you” I told you not to tell people this about me! I am the Queen of Darkness as everyone will tell you 😉  
I found this write to have haunting and residual affects. Nice job. 😁
I love that your inspiration came from another’s poem. I think that is the highest praise and difficult to do I might add. Sexy write you saucy vixen 😊
H🌷

Yes, everyone knows it's the innocent looking ones you have to look out for. lol * innocent look * But you are the Queen of Darkness so you are just going to have to own it. ;) There is still so much trouble for us to get into. Haunting with residual affects - that's perfect. This was one I just automatically wrote in my head literally as I read the other one. I am easily motivated by the darkness, especially the really dark ones. :p And I love that you could feel the sexy in this one, but you are the Queen after all. ;)

Well holy shit Kristina!!!  

Cheers or should I say salud. LOL
Rounds on Adelphina!!

I got here late amiga. Everyone said all of the cool stuff!!!
Great follow up to LtDanslegs poem.
That is what's great on the site. Being inspired by people
and their writing.

Awesome!!!

'Well holy shit Kristina!!!' haha, I love that response from you chica. I feel like I did something right. lol I bet your blood tastes really sweet, be careful offering that to me. :p Forget I said that, definitely next rounds on Adelphina. ;) Never too late for you. It's always lovely to find inspiration in so many people and places. Thanks for stopping by and having a drink with me.

Without really noticing the themes (from my updates link) as soon as I read that first line, it felt like it'd be about vampires, dark and erotic, intense and frightening and yet so intriguing.

Phenomenal work.

Oh yes the first line packs a punch I think, well definitely blood anyway. Does not really matter how you get to that blood does it. ;) But not all blood is the same that's for sure. I love dark and erotic, intense and frightening, and so intriguing. I am all those things Wally. lol I love that you like my Vampire writes... I know it's not for everyone perhaps. 'Phenomenal work' That's so awesome to hear, thank you!

Very interesting piece. These blood soaked clothes are so seductive. That seems like a description for your writing here, seductive and with lots of blood. A combination of erotic sensuality and horror.

I love that line too. ;) Ah, the images in my head... I felt like I was moving through the night in a skirt and heels soaked in blood looking for prey to bring into the eternal darkness with me. ;) So I like that as a description if you choose one. Erotic sensuality and horror, that's definitely something I know well. :p Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts RRm1. I love that!