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Blushes
Romance
Roses
Kisses
I am the girl
Who never much cared
For these petty little things
Mud was my chocolate
And weeds my flowers
But now I feel changed
When I look at you
Dreams of hearts float
Into my mind
And I have never felt so sick
Your smiles are so sweet
Like vanilla ice cream
And warm apple pie
When I hear your laughter
Suddenly flowers are flowers
And mud is only dirt
And I am only a girl
Who blushes when you hug her
And reaches to hold your hand
Only to quickly change her mind
And wait awhile
Kisses
Roses
Romance
Roses
Kisses
I am the girl
Who never much cared
For these petty little things
Mud was my chocolate
And weeds my flowers
But now I feel changed
When I look at you
Dreams of hearts float
Into my mind
And I have never felt so sick
Your smiles are so sweet
Like vanilla ice cream
And warm apple pie
When I hear your laughter
Suddenly flowers are flowers
And mud is only dirt
And I am only a girl
Who blushes when you hug her
And reaches to hold your hand
Only to quickly change her mind
And wait awhile
Kisses
Roses
Romance
Published 2nd Feb 2010
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2nd Feb 2010 00:53am
all i can say is wow., i can relate to this so much and i love it so much.. great work WOW x
2nd Feb 2010 2:05pm
i like it - especially the images of smile and apple pie. as if you've used so many senses in only few lines - and that worked deliciously (should i say? :) )
not too sure about three last lines though - they don't seem to work here, even though i understand your intentions. i can relate to this poem - meaningful and straightforward
not too sure about three last lines though - they don't seem to work here, even though i understand your intentions. i can relate to this poem - meaningful and straightforward
