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i once caught a glimpse
of your inward melancholy
and i wondered
maybe you're like me
and not this thing that i've built you up to be
set high atop a pedestal
reigning over my emotions
where you are not you
but an idea
of you
of your inward melancholy
and i wondered
maybe you're like me
and not this thing that i've built you up to be
set high atop a pedestal
reigning over my emotions
where you are not you
but an idea
of you
Published 1st Jul 2022
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2022 4:29am
Fucking perfect
1st Jul 2022 5:44pm
Anonymous
1st Jul 2022 7:40pm
Yeah punching 6mm plate steel bins is not ok, world’s worst fist bump
1st Jul 2022 5:48am
Dear B,
I really enjoyed this piece. The stark reality of perception vs truth is stunning. Having experienced a situation similar to what you’ve written this was particularly relevant and extremely well done. H🌷
I really enjoyed this piece. The stark reality of perception vs truth is stunning. Having experienced a situation similar to what you’ve written this was particularly relevant and extremely well done. H🌷
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14th Jul 2022 10:27pm
Wow, this is brilliant, and I needed it. I have a habit of putting my friends on a pedestal, and it doesn't end well.
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
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