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Peeling Back The Veneer
The mask fit nicely
over her face,
there wasn't anything
she could use
to cover her brain.
And so she hid for nothing.
over her face,
there wasn't anything
she could use
to cover her brain.
And so she hid for nothing.
Published 28th Jun 2022
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28th Jun 2022 9:00pm
Nicely penned nikki... distilled... echoing long after the last line is read...
28th Jun 2022 11:03pm
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29th Jun 2022 5:43am
29th Jun 2022 2:50am
Hi Nik
This is a great write.
I actually read this a few times over before commenting.
Makes me think of females who put too much makeup on
and play dumb for attention or to make their partner feel smarter.
But underneath a mastermind - plotting to get what she wants.
Either way - yes this awesome!!
This is a great write.
I actually read this a few times over before commenting.
Makes me think of females who put too much makeup on
and play dumb for attention or to make their partner feel smarter.
But underneath a mastermind - plotting to get what she wants.
Either way - yes this awesome!!
29th Jun 2022 11:57am
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18th Jul 2022 7:07pm
So much truth packed into a few words!! There really is no point in pretending to be anyone else, or something else, in appearance, or personality, or accomplishments. Nobody does you like you do!
18th Jul 2022 7:18pm
21st Sep 2022 8:46pm
The covering her brain had me perplexed - I couldn't decide if it was referring to intelligence or evil. But I guess it can apply to both situations. So, if you are a "monster" the mask makes you look "normal", but it can't hide the fact you act like a monster!
