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Mistress
A good wife, mother, friend she's been
Stood by your side through thick and thin
Picked you up when you were down
Helped build your business from the ground
Why should I care if it's wrong
The love we have is just too strong
Isn't happiness what I deserve
Our love I have to preserve
So what if she still loves you
Or your kids need you to make it through
I don't care she gave up everything
Wishes and dreams for a stupid ring
All of that is just an invasion
It doesn't fit into this equation
She brought this on herself you know
Stay at home mom let herself go
It's too bad about the cancer
It's really not my problem to answer
On her own she must learn to live
Then later maybe she can forgive
Either way I can care less
It's just too much added stress
You are who I want and need
Especially now I'm carrying your seed
Entered in the "Mistress Competition"
Stood by your side through thick and thin
Picked you up when you were down
Helped build your business from the ground
Why should I care if it's wrong
The love we have is just too strong
Isn't happiness what I deserve
Our love I have to preserve
So what if she still loves you
Or your kids need you to make it through
I don't care she gave up everything
Wishes and dreams for a stupid ring
All of that is just an invasion
It doesn't fit into this equation
She brought this on herself you know
Stay at home mom let herself go
It's too bad about the cancer
It's really not my problem to answer
On her own she must learn to live
Then later maybe she can forgive
Either way I can care less
It's just too much added stress
You are who I want and need
Especially now I'm carrying your seed
Entered in the "Mistress Competition"
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:)
20th Mar 2012 7:59pm
re: :)
20th Mar 2012 8:16pm
A great compliment coming from you. I don't hold a candle to your skill. Thank you so much!
Jaw dropping
20th Mar 2012 10:04pm
Hi Rachel, this really show how a mistress feel in the scheme of things.
great job
great job
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re: Jaw dropping
20th Mar 2012 10:21pm
Thanks Kym...I don't care what they say, it is a selfish act all the way around.
:(
Anonymous
21st Mar 2012 00:32am
so sad...but you captured the selfish thoughts of a homewrecker Im sure very well!!!!
I have never been nor will I ever come between a man and his wife, Such a selfish act I guess I will never understand how a woman or a man for that matter can interfere in a marriage and all that that marriage has created.
Grrrrrrrr, I could go on and on Sorry
Well Done ;)
I have never been nor will I ever come between a man and his wife, Such a selfish act I guess I will never understand how a woman or a man for that matter can interfere in a marriage and all that that marriage has created.
Grrrrrrrr, I could go on and on Sorry
Well Done ;)
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21st Mar 2012 1:19am
Torn
21st Mar 2012 2:06am
Loving the writing - hating the mistress, lol. Seriously though, it seemed she had a clear idea of the wife's point of view; that's hard to do while staying firmly in character. Great job!
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re: Torn
21st Mar 2012 2:36am
wow.....
21st Mar 2012 6:53pm
all the pain & strife
simply cuts like a knife
spliting the heart mind Soul & Life
between the mistress & the wife....
simply cuts like a knife
spliting the heart mind Soul & Life
between the mistress & the wife....
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re: wow.....
22nd Mar 2012 00:53am
Not to mention the children involved
The issues caused never resolved
When the marriage is completely dissolved
It's hard for them to become more evolved
The issues caused never resolved
When the marriage is completely dissolved
It's hard for them to become more evolved
This is quite...good
3rd Apr 2012 6:18am
I real got into reading this one.. I've read it repeatedly actually..XD
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re: This is quite...good
3rd Apr 2012 6:54am
Damn you're good!
Anonymous
23rd Apr 2012 5:18am
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re: Damn you're good!
23rd Apr 2012 6:08am
I agree with you 100% about the married one is most to blame. They are in complete control of what happens, and if they decide to pursue it, then it is on them.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. :)
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. :)
Re: Mistress
Anonymous
21st Oct 2012 4:21am
Wow glad i stumbled upon this, great read Rachel
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