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Courting
Grip cannister firm
backwards-yank silver ring
tsssssssssssss!
optic yellow trio sing
intoxicating fragrance wafts
from taut rubber epidermis
fuzzy orb caresses the palm
soon flies to fulfill its purpose
when in cobalt blue sky is tossed
masochistic resilience
their mere mortal players lack
though constantly beaten
immediately bounce back
oh the sound of ecstasy!
when by the sweet spot struck
proximate to the sensual song
when electric G-spot's plucked
In shared love begins
ends when one wins advantage
Tennis anyone?
Author's Note
I miss playing Tennis so much. It can be disheartening getting old, not being able to move like in yesteryear. Oh well...you work with what you've got...nothing preventing me from hit'n a bucket of balls every morning, right? Hell I've played against men in their 80's and their still making it work. Damn! I just cheered myself up.
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Re. Courting
You're never too old, BB!!
I used to love playing tennis with my dad... I remember in the summertime we'd also play badminton too. Since he was sick before he passed away I can't even remember the last time I've been on a tennis court... sadly. It's definitely some whole body cardio!! I love how you incorporated a flavor of sexiness and sensuality into your awesome tennis ode 🎾.... Only you would be able to craft that cleverness of sultry weaving words, where intent is still recognizable leaving a wholly alluring and entertaining read! Now that's talent. ;)
Job well done, dear BB!!
I'd volley balls back and forth with you any day... and I'd play tennis too... Har Har Har.... (couldn't resist the cheap joke!!)
Bad, naughty Blue!!
Miss you and hope to see more of you, soon.
Sending much love....
🐻💋🐰🐻💋🐰🐻
🌹 - B
I used to love playing tennis with my dad... I remember in the summertime we'd also play badminton too. Since he was sick before he passed away I can't even remember the last time I've been on a tennis court... sadly. It's definitely some whole body cardio!! I love how you incorporated a flavor of sexiness and sensuality into your awesome tennis ode 🎾.... Only you would be able to craft that cleverness of sultry weaving words, where intent is still recognizable leaving a wholly alluring and entertaining read! Now that's talent. ;)
Job well done, dear BB!!
I'd volley balls back and forth with you any day... and I'd play tennis too... Har Har Har.... (couldn't resist the cheap joke!!)
Bad, naughty Blue!!
Miss you and hope to see more of you, soon.
Sending much love....
🐻💋🐰🐻💋🐰🐻
🌹 - B
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Re: Re. Courting
23rd Jun 2022 5:25pm
Bad, naughty Lady Blue, you're captivting. I am thrilled, but not surprised, that you picked up on the sensuality of this piece. I'd be up for a game of Volleyball or Tennis with you, anytime. It just so hella hot here, right now. Thank you so much for your consistent support of this socially negligent poet 🐻💞🐰
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16th Jun 2022 5:54am
Dear GW,
Excellent detail and description of opening the can of tennis balls and that excited anticipation. I like the subject matter of the game itself but I especially like the idea of hitting some balls around 😉
Your authors note is a poem itself.
I think if you want to play tennis you should play tennis. This is what aspirin is for! Enjoy yourself. Great write. H🌷
Excellent detail and description of opening the can of tennis balls and that excited anticipation. I like the subject matter of the game itself but I especially like the idea of hitting some balls around 😉
Your authors note is a poem itself.
I think if you want to play tennis you should play tennis. This is what aspirin is for! Enjoy yourself. Great write. H🌷
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23rd Jun 2022 5:38pm
Dearest, Honoria❣
Do you think the neighbors would mind if I hit som balls at midnight? It's been so fu%*'n hot here. I'd put raquet to ball with you. Do you play? I enjoyed very much your comment and I am happy Tht you like the piece and my author's note. You're making me feel myself again...I mean not physically but mentally....although if I'm honst...never mind...stick with mentally🥰
Do you think the neighbors would mind if I hit som balls at midnight? It's been so fu%*'n hot here. I'd put raquet to ball with you. Do you play? I enjoyed very much your comment and I am happy Tht you like the piece and my author's note. You're making me feel myself again...I mean not physically but mentally....although if I'm honst...never mind...stick with mentally🥰
Re. Courting
16th Jun 2022 4:24pm
Bob it's great to see your playful stylings and succinct control. I hope you've been well.
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23rd Jun 2022 5:42pm
Hello, hello, Daniel
It's been too long my friend. Are you fully recuperated from your cycling accident? Thank you so much for your truly humbling assessment of my writing. I leatn from our DUP society of poetical masters, you being one of my Sensei's.
It's been too long my friend. Are you fully recuperated from your cycling accident? Thank you so much for your truly humbling assessment of my writing. I leatn from our DUP society of poetical masters, you being one of my Sensei's.
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1st Jul 2022 00:39am
Haha you flatter me my friend. I'm pretty much recovered as I'm going to be at this point I guess. My hip and joint pain is at a minimum, so long as I don't aggravate it overmuch. I have been dealing with other things that have arisen in the wake, but such is often the definition of life I suppose.
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23rd Jun 2022 5:47pm
You can make anything sound sexy GW. You hit the balls out of the court and I know you wanted me to find them. And I have... Oh yes! I want to play tennis and this is my game... But bending over the pool table too. What games do you want to play?
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Re: Re. Courting
23rd Jun 2022 6:18pm
Dearst, Kristina
Thanks for finding my fuzzy invitations to play 🥰 I am thrilled that you play Tennis...and Pool for that matter...really any bending over...never mind. I like playing any game that brings friends and lovers together in a spirit of fun, abandon, friendly competition. The only games I don't play well are mind gamess...unless Scrabble and ceosswords are lumped in that typically negative category.
I am chuffed that uou like this piece and that you detectdd the hints of sexiness spicing it up. Thank you so much for reaing and commenting...now let's PLAY BALL❣❣
Thanks for finding my fuzzy invitations to play 🥰 I am thrilled that you play Tennis...and Pool for that matter...really any bending over...never mind. I like playing any game that brings friends and lovers together in a spirit of fun, abandon, friendly competition. The only games I don't play well are mind gamess...unless Scrabble and ceosswords are lumped in that typically negative category.
I am chuffed that uou like this piece and that you detectdd the hints of sexiness spicing it up. Thank you so much for reaing and commenting...now let's PLAY BALL❣❣
Re. Courting
27th Jun 2022 5:44am
I love the title and the way you decided to write this poem, it's a delightful read.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Courting
10th Jul 2022 2:26am
Thank you so much, LJ❣ I am thrilled and honored that you enjoy this piece.
Re. Courting
3rd Jul 2022 7:27pm
Masochistic eh, but fantastic sublime poem! Eloquently expressed. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
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Re: Re. Courting
10th Jul 2022 2:31am
Wow, what a beautiful comment. I am super pleased that you enjoy the piece. I will, gladly, read your new piece.