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Slipping Through My Cracks
clawing at
the plastic bag
over my face
in way
over my
depth
watching
the cracks
appear slowly
gain a foot hold
inside
my mind
bouncing
off walls
like a maniac
straighjacket
is the fashion
of the day
lego bricks
tumble
down
like paper houses
hit by a
hurricane
dreams used
to hold back
the tide of reality
now they
just underline
a living nightmare
the plastic bag
over my face
in way
over my
depth
watching
the cracks
appear slowly
gain a foot hold
inside
my mind
bouncing
off walls
like a maniac
straighjacket
is the fashion
of the day
lego bricks
tumble
down
like paper houses
hit by a
hurricane
dreams used
to hold back
the tide of reality
now they
just underline
a living nightmare
Published 13th Jun 2022
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13th Jun 2022 6:05pm
Wow would you believe me if i told you i feel the same way at times nicely done Brother poet 🤗
Hugs you honey
Jackie ♥️
Hugs you honey
Jackie ♥️
13th Jun 2022 8:34pm
The struggle is so personal but universal. Your writing helps so many of us.
Never stop talking. Silence is never good.
Agreed, nicely done.
Mary
Never stop talking. Silence is never good.
Agreed, nicely done.
Mary
My deep and heartfelt feelings (hopefully) permeate from this comment. I do feel lighter thinking how your purge poem allows for a bit of catharsis as well as the potential to let others know they're not alone. Your pen is incredibly mighty, but so is your capacity for love, humor and so very much more.... perhaps things that you've not even tapped, yet...
I appreciate you sharing your truth, it reminds me of how bravery looks.
Always here.... always listening.
love, sent.....
🌹 - 💙
x
I appreciate you sharing your truth, it reminds me of how bravery looks.
Always here.... always listening.
love, sent.....
🌹 - 💙
x
14th Jun 2022 00:27am
Wow i love the way you speak, you are such a good friend I adore your heart & soul blue 🫐 And i agree with you 100 % the purge is cleansing if only for a little while♥️
Hang in their buddy xox
Hang in their buddy xox
14th Jun 2022 11:14am
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