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Out to See
Like crystalline waters
Over the sole surface
Of this mind’s eye,
Exquisite sublime -
Sublimated into atmospheres
In collections of clouds…
… Returning in Jupiters
Falling through shrouds -
I absorb you; I consume you.
I take you
With me
In my sojourns
Out to
See.
Published 11th Jun 2022
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11th Jun 2022 7:16am
love the word play, see vs sea and the mindfulness that feels so connected and personal.
The journey you're wanting to explore/expand and travel to.... I love coming aboard...
Thank you for the thoughtful pondering.
🌹-💙
B
The journey you're wanting to explore/expand and travel to.... I love coming aboard...
Thank you for the thoughtful pondering.
🌹-💙
B
11th Jun 2022 10:13am
11th Jun 2022 12:24pm
This is lovely. I thought of the beauty we can carry as we go out to see the world.
11th Jun 2022 12:42pm
14th Jun 2022 1:26am
Hey Cipher,
I read this and examined your pic.
To me it was like the boat was the
talking to that sun. Absorbing it
and taking it along on this journey.
Just so many interesting things in this.
Made my mind wander into the pic
and jump on the boat.
Like bring on the storm in a way- It will be
okay either way.
One of my favorite pic & poem combo from you:)
I read this and examined your pic.
To me it was like the boat was the
talking to that sun. Absorbing it
and taking it along on this journey.
Just so many interesting things in this.
Made my mind wander into the pic
and jump on the boat.
Like bring on the storm in a way- It will be
okay either way.
One of my favorite pic & poem combo from you:)
14th Jun 2022 11:43am
That is such a profound analysis
of this poem A...
I am deeply grateful
for your kind and brilliant words...
:)
of this poem A...
I am deeply grateful
for your kind and brilliant words...
:)
