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Just Wait
hollow effort
ticking in vain
time moves forward
nothing remains
success or failure
wrong or right
all of it fades
in dark of night
this will pass
just wait
none of it matters
just wait
days are hours
hours are breaths
boxes of dust
striving for death
triumphs worthless
anguish too
all that lingers
is how I touch you
this will pass
just wait
none of it matters
just wait
Author's Note
Meh. Why bother?
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Re. Just Wait
8th Jun 2022 2:52pm
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8th Jun 2022 10:45pm
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8th Jun 2022 4:06pm
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8th Jun 2022 10:46pm
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8th Jun 2022 4:53pm
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8th Jun 2022 10:48pm
Thank you, and... I'm sorry? But that makes me feel less alone. I appreciate your presence here.
❤️k
❤️k
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16th Jun 2022 3:55pm
I'm really glad to hear it. Sometimes when I come here, I feel like I'm making a connection as well. 💖🙏
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Re. Just Wait
8th Jun 2022 10:41pm
Sometimes we try to use apathy as a shield to stop the pain but the loss always breaks through in the end. I hope you are okay BT; I can feel the emotion in this. Sending you lots of love and hugs! <3
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8th Jun 2022 10:51pm
It's not an intentional apathy; perhaps more of a numbness.
Thank you for your kindness. I'm not quite okay right now, but if I just wait, eventually I will be... I appreciate the hugs!
❤️k
Thank you for your kindness. I'm not quite okay right now, but if I just wait, eventually I will be... I appreciate the hugs!
❤️k
Re. Just Wait
9th Jun 2022 9:02am
Dear K,
Oh hell to the yeah! I’ve never been more grateful than for that closing stanza. That’s almost made life worth living. A very relatable write on a very personal level. Xx
H🌷
Oh hell to the yeah! I’ve never been more grateful than for that closing stanza. That’s almost made life worth living. A very relatable write on a very personal level. Xx
H🌷
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I deeply relate to your words and that sort of 'numbness', k. It's such a relief sometimes to see reflections of your own struggles.. are my own thoughts, too. I often feel hesitant to admit that for fear that it comes across incorrectly when I am nothing but sincere.... I feel like that empathy or shared relief of recognition sorta means I'm only human, with my flaws (like most of us) making it feel less like I'm flailing on an island all alone with all my bullshit...That there's hope, there... (if that makes any sense at all!??... lol...)
Thank you for sharing yourself and your truth.
It's brave, open and I deeply appreciate that courage....
Stellar read, dear lady.
hugs - 💙
🌹B
Thank you for sharing yourself and your truth.
It's brave, open and I deeply appreciate that courage....
Stellar read, dear lady.
hugs - 💙
🌹B
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Re. Just Wait
15th Jul 2022 7:07pm
Never, ever give up. There is ALWAYS hope. My hope for you is that today is a good day.
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