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the reality of sunshine
my senses arouse in the quiet fury
over brooding bruises and blood
I seek your desire when it is too cold to touch you there
my darkness stirs and wants you in the cruel torment
I met you there in days past
when I was too mad to see or know your voice
I felt you and understood your calm in the infernal silence
it deafened me to any other voice
I recognized yours and I came back to the reality of me
I don't know why I love a man like you
you pull from my touch
and I burn where your hand brushed against mine
I would seek your touch in the fire allowing it to consume me
Published 8th Jun 2022
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8th Jun 2022 10:53am
Torment. To want someone who has retreated into indifference is like living in a furnace.
Especially if they've wronged you and their silence is a barrier against coming clean by apologizing. Stabbed me in the back and snubbed me, really? Poison with self-righteous laughter?
Your work often cuts right through me. I imagine that your own sense of intimacy includes a cornucopia of nuances floating in a sea of signals on a planet of resonances.
You get into the smallest spaces in the human dynamc and create an entire civilization. Crushing insight. Well done. Again.
Especially if they've wronged you and their silence is a barrier against coming clean by apologizing. Stabbed me in the back and snubbed me, really? Poison with self-righteous laughter?
Your work often cuts right through me. I imagine that your own sense of intimacy includes a cornucopia of nuances floating in a sea of signals on a planet of resonances.
You get into the smallest spaces in the human dynamc and create an entire civilization. Crushing insight. Well done. Again.
9th Jun 2022 3:41am
Excellent, madame. You're on quite a roll, and I definitely have noticed that you switched gears into a more physically erotic aspect in your writes.
I like what I'm reading from you!
I like what I'm reading from you!
9th Jun 2022 3:44am
good evening dearest Styxian thank you graciously I have been inspired as of late to go into that zone... I deeply appreciate the love you've shown me here 💕
14th Jul 2022 4:15pm
Comprehending the attraction one feels for another can be beyond words. Your musings and spills capture bit by bit, like pieces to a puzzle amidst a canvass of stars, it's grand and it's terrific.
Great work.
Great work.
14th Jul 2022 4:35pm
hello dearest Wally yes understanding that attraction can be difficult...I just write my feelings out sometimes they surprise me... thank you for the very thoughtful comment ❤️
