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Rolling Grin
I love this ritual,
As I look
To
The air,
Seeing what is
There,
Drawing it
To
The mind -
Rotating it like a design
Of a clockwork
Machine…
Gears
That
Spin
A rolling grin.
Published 4th Jun 2022
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5th Jun 2022 2:49am
Hey Cipher,
Interesting. Never thought about gears as rolling grins - but yeah they are.
Such a creative way you incorporated this into a poem. In my mind I hear all
the gears shifting as I read. Like its own era of creation. This has a timeless feel to it.
Strange since you also included the word clockwork. Too cool.
A poetic industrial revolution going on here.
So unique:)
Interesting. Never thought about gears as rolling grins - but yeah they are.
Such a creative way you incorporated this into a poem. In my mind I hear all
the gears shifting as I read. Like its own era of creation. This has a timeless feel to it.
Strange since you also included the word clockwork. Too cool.
A poetic industrial revolution going on here.
So unique:)
5th Jun 2022 9:27am
A poetic industrial revolution...
There goes the walking/talking
poetical prompt machine...
Bearing a rolling grin... :p
Thank you so much for looking
into the depths of this production, A...
I deeply appreciate that...
You have inspired me so much
and continue to inspire me...
There goes the walking/talking
poetical prompt machine...
Bearing a rolling grin... :p
Thank you so much for looking
into the depths of this production, A...
I deeply appreciate that...
You have inspired me so much
and continue to inspire me...
