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The colour O
Tangerine star
A blazing burst of flavour
The splash and the squeeze
That blends your flesh with my fruit
I fervently consume the juice
And the juice consumes me
Swallows me whole
Drowning in bleeding juice
Your body
Tart and stringent
Drizzled in sharp nectar
And brimming with untold possibilities
I’m so ready
For
This
A blazing burst of flavour
The splash and the squeeze
That blends your flesh with my fruit
I fervently consume the juice
And the juice consumes me
Swallows me whole
Drowning in bleeding juice
Your body
Tart and stringent
Drizzled in sharp nectar
And brimming with untold possibilities
I’m so ready
For
This
Published 3rd Jun 2022
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3rd Jun 2022 7:45am
3rd Jun 2022 7:51am
What a stellar metaphoric juicy tidbit!
This competition entry is the perfect amount of tantalizing 👌🏻 I was captivated.
It's truly lovely to see you return to DUP
Glad you're back with us :)
(and good luck with the comp!)
🌹 - B
This competition entry is the perfect amount of tantalizing 👌🏻 I was captivated.
It's truly lovely to see you return to DUP
Glad you're back with us :)
(and good luck with the comp!)
🌹 - B
4th Jun 2022 10:50am
