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Into You
I couldn't be more into you
Even if I tried
And if I could I'd cast a spell
Just to make you mine
Your lips are so alluring
Your embrace is heavenly
I would be so happy though
If you gave your heart to me
Even if I tried
And if I could I'd cast a spell
Just to make you mine
Your lips are so alluring
Your embrace is heavenly
I would be so happy though
If you gave your heart to me
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Re. Into You
27th May 2022 1:46pm
Re: Re. Into You
27th May 2022 3:10pm
Re. Into You
Anonymous
27th May 2022 3:11pm
Hey Faith, this is beautiful, light, simple, heart tugging, I enjoyed this much, purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. Into You
27th May 2022 6:11pm
Re. Into You
Anonymous
27th May 2022 11:07pm
… I think the first person that you think of when reading this poem should be a test of how you really feel about a person. It’s a lovely thought never the less.
Thank you for sharing, Faith.
-M
Thank you for sharing, Faith.
-M
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Re. Into You
29th May 2022 1:41am
Interesting brevity that describes the positives but ends with a bit of uncertainty.
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Hoi hoi
Light words; big message!
Wonderfully human!
If this one doesn’t spell L-O-V-E all over it???
Love to check regularly what you’ve been up to!
Like the picture too!
Thank you for sharing it!
Kind regards, Gus
Light words; big message!
Wonderfully human!
If this one doesn’t spell L-O-V-E all over it???
Love to check regularly what you’ve been up to!
Like the picture too!
Thank you for sharing it!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re. Into You
5th Jun 2022 3:45am
Re. Into You
6th Jun 2022 5:39pm
Hoi hoi FaithM.,
How are you doing? The real answer, please.
No news from Amsterdam or any other place we’re travelling to, I just stopped by to see if you wrote anything new! A poem in itself!
Yes, artistically I’m Into You.
No doubt about it!
Kind regards, Gus
How are you doing? The real answer, please.
No news from Amsterdam or any other place we’re travelling to, I just stopped by to see if you wrote anything new! A poem in itself!
Yes, artistically I’m Into You.
No doubt about it!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. Into You
7th Jun 2022 9:03am
Hi, Gus! Sorry I'm so slow in answering you. I haven't been well. Having more tests run to find out what's wrong. i will let you know as soon as I can. Thank you for being so kind.
Faith
Faith
Re. Into You
7th Jun 2022 12:41pm
Hoi hoi
Sorry to hear you are not feeling ok. I hope you get well soon.
You don’t have to answer if it’s not convenient!
Take care!!!
Kind regards, Gus
Sorry to hear you are not feeling ok. I hope you get well soon.
You don’t have to answer if it’s not convenient!
Take care!!!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re. Into You
12th Jun 2022 11:31am
Re. Into You
26th Jun 2022 2:21pm
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(Braille for *you like this)
IRL
Yes, FaithM., I do like this a lot.
Kind regards, Gus
(Braille for *you like this)
IRL
Yes, FaithM., I do like this a lot.
Kind regards, Gus
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