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I've Got Status (Thanks To DUP)
I don't like to brag
but I've got status
I'm an old-timer here
I may be old-school
but I'm no fool
So this is how
dark it is
here in the deep
the deep underground
the view is complete
When I need to write
Everything else stops
There's nothing
I can't drop
Put off or delay anyway
It's always been true
that's the way I am
So the deep underground
Is where it's at
Get my learning and schooling
(I ain't fooling)
but I've got status
I'm an old-timer here
I may be old-school
but I'm no fool
So this is how
dark it is
here in the deep
the deep underground
the view is complete
When I need to write
Everything else stops
There's nothing
I can't drop
Put off or delay anyway
It's always been true
that's the way I am
So the deep underground
Is where it's at
Get my learning and schooling
(I ain't fooling)
Published 13th May 2022
Author's Note
Just a little experimental piece to honor this place which I am grateful exists.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Anonymous
- Edited 13th May 2022 1:01pm
13th May 2022 12:59pm
So true.
14th May 2022 00:50am
Thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my poem. I really appreciate it.
13th May 2022 1:12pm
14th May 2022 00:51am
13th May 2022 1:23pm
Dear H,
You are so sweet! I always love it when you come by and leave your wonderful comments. Your feedback is always so uplifting. It's an honor to be in your reading list!
You are so sweet! I always love it when you come by and leave your wonderful comments. Your feedback is always so uplifting. It's an honor to be in your reading list!
13th May 2022 1:51pm
Dear Faith
My opinion?
You don’t need status. You are more than good enough with your down to earth, warm and honest words!
Could status be the admiration from colleagues?
Well deserved admiration is what I mean.
A young heart, a lively imagination and a rich palette full of imagery.
Word warrior, who else than you could have dreamt this up?
So glad I found you here!
Kind regards, Gus
My opinion?
You don’t need status. You are more than good enough with your down to earth, warm and honest words!
Could status be the admiration from colleagues?
Well deserved admiration is what I mean.
A young heart, a lively imagination and a rich palette full of imagery.
Word warrior, who else than you could have dreamt this up?
So glad I found you here!
Kind regards, Gus
14th May 2022 1:01am
Dear Gus,
Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I meant that because I'm an old-timer here that I've got status! Been here ten years now which is a long time. I do appreciate all of your kind words though and I'm glad, too, that our paths have crossed. Great to hear from you! Oh, I have to admit that word warrior is not my intention. I stole it from somewhere because it struck a chord in me.
Just me,
Faith
Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I meant that because I'm an old-timer here that I've got status! Been here ten years now which is a long time. I do appreciate all of your kind words though and I'm glad, too, that our paths have crossed. Great to hear from you! Oh, I have to admit that word warrior is not my intention. I stole it from somewhere because it struck a chord in me.
Just me,
Faith
13th May 2022 3:01pm
I am also glad I found this wonderful place where we can express ourselves and let go. Keep writing, sweets.
14th May 2022 1:03am
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14th May 2022 1:07am
Hi there! Thank you for stopping by and the entry to your RL. Much appreciated!
Anonymous
13th May 2022 11:07pm
Sometimes it’s just nice to know that we are valued. It’s mad how we’ve all become this mad little dysfunctional family. What a strange and wonderful corner of the internet.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
Thank you for sharing.
-M
14th May 2022 1:10am
I agree wholeheartedly! Thank you for stopping by and gracing my page with your presence!
Faith
Faith
14th May 2022 10:06am
14th May 2022 10:09am
15th May 2022 1:03pm
Don't let that "Dangerous Mind" status go to your head! LOL!
Excellent tribute write.
Excellent tribute write.
15th May 2022 1:32pm
Lol...some people were just born that way. I actually meant that I have status because I am Old-timer here, having been here for ten years now. Thank you for the wonderful compliment! I really appreciate it!
