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because we are
we are connected
because we are
like the links in a chain
held together
as the poets
and the other writers
word warriors
one and all
and more I say
like true explorers
ever ready to trudge
forward into the unknown
because we are
like the links in a chain
held together
as the poets
and the other writers
word warriors
one and all
and more I say
like true explorers
ever ready to trudge
forward into the unknown
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Re. because we are
11th May 2022 10:42pm
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Re. because we are
11th May 2022 11:24pm
We are linked, at the very least, by the words we share. Regards, Robert.
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Re: Re. because we are
14th May 2022 1:15am
Re. because we are
I absolutely love the imagery in this poem, the chain links are a magnificent mental picture.
(the imagery of the taught pull, that keeps us together.) Fabulous Faith!
"word warriors" - so much is said in 2 words, and much like the chain above it, the standing together and looking after each other, brought warmth to me.
the last stanza sums it all up beautifully that step we take, trying something new, not knowing where it will take us.
Loved the image attached here too.
Really #inspirational poetry! Fantastic!
Blue Skies my friend
Al -x-
(the imagery of the taught pull, that keeps us together.) Fabulous Faith!
"word warriors" - so much is said in 2 words, and much like the chain above it, the standing together and looking after each other, brought warmth to me.
the last stanza sums it all up beautifully that step we take, trying something new, not knowing where it will take us.
Loved the image attached here too.
Really #inspirational poetry! Fantastic!
Blue Skies my friend
Al -x-
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Re: Re. because we are
Thank you for your wonderful remarks, Al. They mean a lot to me. So does being on your reading list!
I'm always happy when you drop by!
Just me,
Faith
I'm always happy when you drop by!
Just me,
Faith
Re. because we are
12th May 2022 2:51am
Hi Faith:)
I loved how this started out. Being connected in vision when it comes to
writing and then battling it out on the page.
Searching for the best word choices of our truth.
Nicely put!!
I loved how this started out. Being connected in vision when it comes to
writing and then battling it out on the page.
Searching for the best word choices of our truth.
Nicely put!!
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Re: Re. because we are
14th May 2022 1:34am
Thank you very much, Adelphina! I appreciate your lovely comments very much!
Re. because we are
Dear F,
Your poem has me thinking of how courageous we all are in putting ourselves out there and sharing our dearest thoughts in such an honest way. Each stanza has such an innocence to it in showing us how we’re all similar. I think this piece expresses poetry in its purest form. Wonderful write! H🌷
Your poem has me thinking of how courageous we all are in putting ourselves out there and sharing our dearest thoughts in such an honest way. Each stanza has such an innocence to it in showing us how we’re all similar. I think this piece expresses poetry in its purest form. Wonderful write! H🌷
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Re: Re. because we are
Dear H,
Your comments made my heart smile. Thank you for one of the greatest compliments I have ever received to have written something in it's purest form. That means so much.
I became aware at a very young age of the risk a writer takes when putting his writing "out there!" I embraced it more from a challenge angle and before the Internet came, I compulsivly submitted my work to editors. My dream was to see my name in print. Even though I got my share of rejection letters back, I never let it discourage me. I simply sent something else out. Eventually, it paid off and I got published. It was always worth it.
Faith
Your comments made my heart smile. Thank you for one of the greatest compliments I have ever received to have written something in it's purest form. That means so much.
I became aware at a very young age of the risk a writer takes when putting his writing "out there!" I embraced it more from a challenge angle and before the Internet came, I compulsivly submitted my work to editors. My dream was to see my name in print. Even though I got my share of rejection letters back, I never let it discourage me. I simply sent something else out. Eventually, it paid off and I got published. It was always worth it.
Faith
Re. because we are
Anonymous
12th May 2022 6:04am
Hello there
What I love about poetry is that we are all connected — it is as simple and as complicated as that. Whether or not we like it or not, we all become a part of each other’s story. Sometimes it is good to be reminded of that simple fact.
I am glad your poem reminds us of this. Thank you for sharing it :)
-M
What I love about poetry is that we are all connected — it is as simple and as complicated as that. Whether or not we like it or not, we all become a part of each other’s story. Sometimes it is good to be reminded of that simple fact.
I am glad your poem reminds us of this. Thank you for sharing it :)
-M
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Re: Re. because we are
15th May 2022 12:12pm
Hi there!
Thank you for your wonderful remarks! It's so great that we are all connected and a part of each other's story. There's something very special about it. I am so glad you're here!
Faith
Thank you for your wonderful remarks! It's so great that we are all connected and a part of each other's story. There's something very special about it. I am so glad you're here!
Faith
Re. because we are
Hoi hoi F.,
Although the connection is instable/unstable, through your poem we can be connected.
The whole thing is brimful lof beauty. And, like many before me, I was stricken bij the ‘word worrior’ part.
Is stricken with ck? Strike, stricken? One day I’ll be word perfect.
The beauty of this one is evident, Faith. But the best is yet to come. Nice photo too!
Kind regards, Gus
Although the connection is instable/unstable, through your poem we can be connected.
The whole thing is brimful lof beauty. And, like many before me, I was stricken bij the ‘word worrior’ part.
Is stricken with ck? Strike, stricken? One day I’ll be word perfect.
The beauty of this one is evident, Faith. But the best is yet to come. Nice photo too!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. because we are
15th May 2022 12:13pm
Re. because we are
12th May 2022 10:14am
Re: Re. because we are
15th May 2022 11:51am
Re. because we are
Lead us on then, Faith. I'll follow you! Take us to that place you have no doubt read about... ;-) This is both inspirational & beautiful. :-)
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Re: Re. because we are
15th May 2022 12:14pm
Thank you so much for your lovely comments! You made my heart smile big time!
Re. because we are
Hoi hoi
No news from a hill in the south east of France.
But silently, like a thief in the night, I returned to the place delict for another eyeful of bliss.
Great piece of work @Faith!
Thankyou.
Kind regards, Gus
No news from a hill in the south east of France.
But silently, like a thief in the night, I returned to the place delict for another eyeful of bliss.
Great piece of work @Faith!
Thankyou.
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. because we are
15th May 2022 12:08pm
Hi, Gus! Thank you for your lovely comments! I wasn't expecting such a wonderful response to my poem! I appreciate what you and everyone else has said about it.
Faith
Faith
Re. because we are
14th May 2022 1:29am
Great !... So simple, so deep, so sincere, so honest ...
I really enjoy this poem...
... 😍👍
I really enjoy this poem...
... 😍👍
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Re: Re. because we are
14th May 2022 1:32am
Thank you for your wonderful response to my poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Re: Re. because we are
14th May 2022 1:33am