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Our finite timelines are likening to train tracks
stretching from onset to finality –
only to board another train
be it a spiritual destination
or a chance to start anew
I’ve made many (too many, maybe)
an unscheduled stop
distracted by the ado of bright lights
flim-flam artisans shouting
from their mobile homes,
street corners, as well
Some stops were brief
others felt like an extended binge
yet others, due to my hopping
on the wrong train
or the one going in the opposite
direction delayed my arrival…..
I could piggy-back on a different train
stay in the caboose staring into the past
perhaps, I can hitch a ride, stay with the Engineer
focusing on what’s coming ahead
For now,
I’ll settle a run-on sentence connecting
all the dots and stops and destinations,
enjoying the landscapes and ride
unique word count: 105
Comma
Our finite timelines are likening to train tracks
stretching from onset to finality –
only to board another train
be it a spiritual destination
or a chance to start anew
I’ve made many (too many, maybe)
an unscheduled stop
distracted by the ado of bright lights
flim-flam artisans shouting
from their mobile homes,
street corners, as well
Some stops were brief
others felt like an extended binge
yet others, due to my hopping
on the wrong train
or the one going in the opposite
direction delayed my arrival…..
I could piggy-back on a different train
stay in the caboose staring into the past
perhaps, I can hitch a ride, stay with the Engineer
focusing on what’s coming ahead
For now,
I’ll settle a run-on sentence connecting
all the dots and stops and destinations,
enjoying the landscapes and ride
unique word count: 105
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