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Just, Breathe.
The jolts
of pain
emanate
like cracks in cement
spreading
tender tendrils
spiderwebbing outward
Gasps turn
to gulps
Self saving
mediation
protects my airway
Deep in concentration
each
second
eternal
Focused breathing
s l o w
-
deliberate
"Inhale
Exhale"
Quieting
the crush
Filling myself
of a
pinpoint
moment
Submerging
senses
washing them clean
with natural wonder
Wading in
curative waves
of creativity
Expelling
misplaced panic
relinquishing it
unto the tides
Cleansing
dark marred
recesses
Resuscitating life
willing the color back
into all facets
Replenishment
is beautiful freedom
blooming
in calming ease
so generously
breathed
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 25th Apr 2022
Author's Note
My own pic. Just a little stretch of beach where I go to find that tucked away bit of instant happiness, as well as the salty breeze off the water.... It can't be beat...
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Re. Just, Breathe.
25th Apr 2022 10:45am
Sounds like you found a little slice of sandy heaven
Love and light gorgeous
Ron x
Love and light gorgeous
Ron x
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Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
25th Apr 2022 10:51am
The pic makes it appear better than it is!! There's not very much beauty in the actual Bay, which is what this pic is
.. Most of the time, it's stinky and overcrowded... Lol... This was a photo of a good day... I serendipitously caught a pretty moment... 😂
Thanks for the read /comments, my dear!!
I deeply appreciate it
🌹 - 💙
Xo
B
.. Most of the time, it's stinky and overcrowded... Lol... This was a photo of a good day... I serendipitously caught a pretty moment... 😂
Thanks for the read /comments, my dear!!
I deeply appreciate it
🌹 - 💙
Xo
B
Re. Just, Breathe.
25th Apr 2022 11:49am
Wait up! Nicely penned B… the chilly weather has me thinking summer… 🇮🇪
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Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
25th Apr 2022 4:07pm
Ohhh I'm sooo jealous... That sounds wonderful... It's already been way too warm and your retreat to one of my absolutely favorite bucket list locations has me saving up for my own Irish adventures Lol....
Glad you enjoyed, LilD.
Keep the awesome updates coming!!
🍀
-B
Glad you enjoyed, LilD.
Keep the awesome updates coming!!
🍀
-B
Re. Just, Breathe.
25th Apr 2022 3:16pm
Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
25th Apr 2022 4:04pm
Such a lovely visit, Elenore.... I'm delighted you enjoyed... Thank you for taking the time to read and for leaving me your thoughts, it's much appreciated, dear lady!
I hope you are doing well - 🦋
🌹 - B
I hope you are doing well - 🦋
🌹 - B
Re. Just, Breathe.
25th Apr 2022 5:40pm
When those anxious moments have you on the verge of hyperventilating and you require something like a bag to breathe into. I've found when she feels a bit overwhelmed a tight hug, think of a fighter pilots pressure suit, helps keep the breathing normal and blood where it is supposed to stay (like a pressure suit prevents the g-forces from pulling blood from your head). It is a wonderful feeling, with our contact, sensing the anxiety melt away from her.
Your poem captures the anxious moments, and labored breathing that overwhelms. And in your astute way have discovered the beach as an organic natural remedy, non-pill popping.
Your poem captures the anxious moments, and labored breathing that overwhelms. And in your astute way have discovered the beach as an organic natural remedy, non-pill popping.
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Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
Ohh Leo.... You really get to the heart of it in such a distinctively lovely way while being terrifically spot on!! I'll definitely take hugs anytime, especially from a huggable lion 🦁 like yourself!! 🤗🤗🤗... I believe that's the only other natural 'antidote' to the pains of anxiety that beats the welcomed soothe the seaside offers....
You've uncovered the secret!! I'll take 5-6 hugs three x's a day until no longer needed, please !
*Per Dr's orders!!!
😏 - 🏥🚑🩺💊🤗
💋 - B
You've uncovered the secret!! I'll take 5-6 hugs three x's a day until no longer needed, please !
*Per Dr's orders!!!
😏 - 🏥🚑🩺💊🤗
💋 - B
Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
26th Apr 2022 12:33pm
Re. Just, Breathe.
25th Apr 2022 6:39pm
I love poetry that personifies the natural. I'm even more grateful for those that don't make it all pretty. I think you've captured the anxiety perfectly in this. That feeling of the world crashing... then countering it with the meditating calmness.. I can't think of a better choice for the metaphor.
Perfect penmanship
Beautifully put together
Thank you for sharing
Calm blue Skies to you Mrs Velvete.
Al
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Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
Ahhh, I thoroughly bask in your lovely comments here, my sage friend... Thanks for the honest, kind words... I'm sincerely grateful. (Hope you've been well!)
I too, completely concur and wholly appreciate the times when a poem is not so ceremoniously adorned with every pretty little bow and ribbon... Lol.... Some pieces are meant to exist within the dank darkness or wherever that not so pretty place is of which certain words are purposely created to dwell. It's also that state of conveyance that I find fascinating and truly artist inspired, along with the word meaning themselves. I think that there's a particular time a writer decides to "beautify" a write, essentially making it their own version of 'pretty' which might not necessarily jive with anyone else's idea of the same... and that is totally aok, imo. To each their own— always! It's the plethora of diversity and fresh approaches that I find myself seeking, constantly.
Note: I have an unusually large flower addiction in IRL and on the page... Lol... and written some pretty audacious floral imbued whoppers that I know are probably dripping of sweet girly girl 'pretty'... (yes, sometimes I just can't help myself!) ... I'm only human.... Lmao!! 😂 😂.... I tease but it's totally true! ...Hee hee... I feel we all have those different sides we randomly share.
Which I adore and relish so much....
I find both light and dark forms of expression a complete draw and often find myself falling into poetic 'love' with a tragic gothic tearjerker only to turn around and have my breath catch at the loveliest penned romantic opus...And damn, I do love that feeling, so!!
Ain't poetry grand!!
(Yes, it certainly is.)
Thanks again for allowing my thoughts to ramble a bit, Al... Your blue skies are always so beautiful to partake :) ... .Until next time...
In abundant kindness,
🌹 - B
x
I too, completely concur and wholly appreciate the times when a poem is not so ceremoniously adorned with every pretty little bow and ribbon... Lol.... Some pieces are meant to exist within the dank darkness or wherever that not so pretty place is of which certain words are purposely created to dwell. It's also that state of conveyance that I find fascinating and truly artist inspired, along with the word meaning themselves. I think that there's a particular time a writer decides to "beautify" a write, essentially making it their own version of 'pretty' which might not necessarily jive with anyone else's idea of the same... and that is totally aok, imo. To each their own— always! It's the plethora of diversity and fresh approaches that I find myself seeking, constantly.
Note: I have an unusually large flower addiction in IRL and on the page... Lol... and written some pretty audacious floral imbued whoppers that I know are probably dripping of sweet girly girl 'pretty'... (yes, sometimes I just can't help myself!) ... I'm only human.... Lmao!! 😂 😂.... I tease but it's totally true! ...Hee hee... I feel we all have those different sides we randomly share.
Which I adore and relish so much....
I find both light and dark forms of expression a complete draw and often find myself falling into poetic 'love' with a tragic gothic tearjerker only to turn around and have my breath catch at the loveliest penned romantic opus...And damn, I do love that feeling, so!!
Ain't poetry grand!!
(Yes, it certainly is.)
Thanks again for allowing my thoughts to ramble a bit, Al... Your blue skies are always so beautiful to partake :) ... .Until next time...
In abundant kindness,
🌹 - B
x
Re. Just, Breathe.
25th Apr 2022 6:57pm
Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
25th Apr 2022 7:22pm
Hey there, Tim :)
It's a bit of an allegory, perhaps.... Emotional waves and literal waves one cleansing the other but both relentless in their own right....
I love seeing you visit and hope you are doing well.... Please don't be a stranger, as I sincerely adore your genuine thoughtfulness 🦋
Warm regards,
🌹 - 💙
B
It's a bit of an allegory, perhaps.... Emotional waves and literal waves one cleansing the other but both relentless in their own right....
I love seeing you visit and hope you are doing well.... Please don't be a stranger, as I sincerely adore your genuine thoughtfulness 🦋
Warm regards,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Just, Breathe.
25th Apr 2022 7:34pm
Amazing, as I walked on the beach at Malibu this morning I was thinking some of the same thoughts you shared. Amazing. Again, the vibes of magic connect hearts of like passion. Hugs and love, Oral
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Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
26th Apr 2022 5:34am
Awww... Now I'm totally jealous.... Tampa Bay is a yucky little beach compared to Malibu... You're so fancy today, O. (I tease!)
I hope you have enjoyed your time there and were or are able to take in your natural surroundings to the fullest, that I'll spend my night dreaming of!
🏖
I feel you connectedness even from across the country..
Be well , dear bard!
Thanks for the lovely sentiments
🌹-💙
B
I hope you have enjoyed your time there and were or are able to take in your natural surroundings to the fullest, that I'll spend my night dreaming of!
🏖
I feel you connectedness even from across the country..
Be well , dear bard!
Thanks for the lovely sentiments
🌹-💙
B
Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
26th Apr 2022 1:37pm
Yes, felt, and feel the connection as two "beach bums" ride the waves of yes. Thanks for your comments. Hugs and love. Oral
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Re. Just, Breathe.
25th Apr 2022 9:46pm
hello beautiful Blue the ocean is my favorite place on earth
it lends so much calm and peace when in need
you have anxiety attacks I understand completely
there really is nothing more painful...writing helps me quite a bit...
I hope you find it soothing as well... I feel for your pain...
so much beauty to be gathered even from pain
great write 💕
it lends so much calm and peace when in need
you have anxiety attacks I understand completely
there really is nothing more painful...writing helps me quite a bit...
I hope you find it soothing as well... I feel for your pain...
so much beauty to be gathered even from pain
great write 💕
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Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
You're absolutely right, dearest Bren. I swear the beach has magical properties that allow a heart mind and soul to heal and rejuvenate, in record time. Maybe it's the salty air..... Lol... I find it such a natural comfort and intensity therapeutic.
I'm deeply appreciative of your thoughtful, kind and observant words. It's always so nice to realize you're not alone and that there are definitely others that can understand and empathize with what I'm writing and from where I am coming from.....
Thank you for stopping by and for taking the time, dear one!
It's a joy to share with you.
🌹 - 🏖
💙-B
I'm deeply appreciative of your thoughtful, kind and observant words. It's always so nice to realize you're not alone and that there are definitely others that can understand and empathize with what I'm writing and from where I am coming from.....
Thank you for stopping by and for taking the time, dear one!
It's a joy to share with you.
🌹 - 🏖
💙-B
Re. Just, Breathe.
26th Apr 2022 1:59am
Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
Thanks so much, Lj!
It's kind of you to stop by and say so... 🙏
It's a nice place to help to relieve the anxiety that can often plague...
🌹 - B
It's kind of you to stop by and say so... 🙏
It's a nice place to help to relieve the anxiety that can often plague...
🌹 - B
Re. Just, Breathe.
The happiness of the beach. The nude beach is called me and you, to go together, LOL. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
26th Apr 2022 5:38am
Heh heh heh... Not brave enough to venture there... but the beach is indeed a magical place that allows for much needed relaxation and potential healing!
You are silly, my friend!
Lol...
Thank you for being a faithful reader.
🌹 -
You are silly, my friend!
Lol...
Thank you for being a faithful reader.
🌹 -
Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
27th Apr 2022 00:32am
Re. Just, Breathe.
26th Apr 2022 6:57am
Dear BV,
Okay, I did. I just took a nice deep breath from reading this piece again and visually taking a stroll with you quietly along this lovely beach. It worked. I’m no longer aggravated to the point of implosion. Keeping it real is so righteous. Not everything is pristine, nor is it meant to be but having a place like this to go to and then sharing it with others…awesome! Loved it. H🌷
Okay, I did. I just took a nice deep breath from reading this piece again and visually taking a stroll with you quietly along this lovely beach. It worked. I’m no longer aggravated to the point of implosion. Keeping it real is so righteous. Not everything is pristine, nor is it meant to be but having a place like this to go to and then sharing it with others…awesome! Loved it. H🌷
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Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
26th Apr 2022 8:05pm
Awww...I can almost feel your deep calming breaths, Honoria... What a beautiful relief!!
Having a little nook to find solace and claim as your own personal getaway space can be one of the healthiest things you can probably do for yourself. Being your own healthiest version, is not only self beneficial but it also benefits all those closest, that you deeply care about, too.
I'm so grateful for your thoughtful comments and for you taking the time to share them with me....
It's one of my favorite times of day, reading your amazing feedback!!
Much thanks and love,
🌹-💙
B
Having a little nook to find solace and claim as your own personal getaway space can be one of the healthiest things you can probably do for yourself. Being your own healthiest version, is not only self beneficial but it also benefits all those closest, that you deeply care about, too.
I'm so grateful for your thoughtful comments and for you taking the time to share them with me....
It's one of my favorite times of day, reading your amazing feedback!!
Much thanks and love,
🌹-💙
B
Re. Just, Breathe.
26th Apr 2022 8:14am
over
pavement
cracks
a
changing
atmosphere ..
world
closing
in
everything
looming
large
inside
your
screaming
no air
left for
breathing
panicing
in famaliar
surrounsings
noise of
the world
crushing
pressure
So much
pressure
it
needs
release
finding
that quiet
sanctuary
to
breathe
again
a
childhood
place
that
never hurts
you
back
to
basics
one breath
at a
time
pavement
cracks
a
changing
atmosphere ..
world
closing
in
everything
looming
large
inside
your
screaming
no air
left for
breathing
panicing
in famaliar
surrounsings
noise of
the world
crushing
pressure
So much
pressure
it
needs
release
finding
that quiet
sanctuary
to
breathe
again
a
childhood
place
that
never hurts
you
back
to
basics
one breath
at a
time
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Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
26th Apr 2022 8:21am
🍃Like a breath of fresh air, dear Colin! 🍃
Thank you for the lovely and inspired poem-ply. You know how much I love them!!!
🌹 - 💙
B
Thank you for the lovely and inspired poem-ply. You know how much I love them!!!
🌹 - 💙
B
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26th Apr 2022 12:17pm
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Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
26th Apr 2022 7:49pm
Wow... This is simply one of the best comments / compliments I've ever received—My heart skipped a beat, my friend. Thank you so so much - 💙
Much love-
🌹 - B
Much love-
🌹 - B
Re. Just, Breathe.
26th Apr 2022 7:40pm
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26th Apr 2022 7:46pm
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Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
28th Apr 2022 4:18pm
Hey there :)
What a wonderfully touching and goosebump inducing story, Tim. That must have been almost overwhelming powerful to feel, in the moment... I do hope that awesome experience brought you a bit of peace and serenity. That's exactly how I feel, after coming home from a beach visit...
Yes, I do feel lucky to have the Gulf as close as I do or even the ocean, which isn't that far of a drive. That natural healing... those feelings of ease and harmony.... leaving it all behind for a while, letting the wind, water and sand transport me.... Sometimes, there's no better therapy. I just can't forget to bring the sunscreen... Ha!
I very much appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts with me.... It's my deep pleasure.
Be well, my friend!
🌹 - 🏖
💙B
What a wonderfully touching and goosebump inducing story, Tim. That must have been almost overwhelming powerful to feel, in the moment... I do hope that awesome experience brought you a bit of peace and serenity. That's exactly how I feel, after coming home from a beach visit...
Yes, I do feel lucky to have the Gulf as close as I do or even the ocean, which isn't that far of a drive. That natural healing... those feelings of ease and harmony.... leaving it all behind for a while, letting the wind, water and sand transport me.... Sometimes, there's no better therapy. I just can't forget to bring the sunscreen... Ha!
I very much appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts with me.... It's my deep pleasure.
Be well, my friend!
🌹 - 🏖
💙B
Re. Just, Breathe.
Anonymous
30th Apr 2022 2:51am
how beautifully you've penned this moment of sweeping dread, swallowed and released though artistry... what a triumphant moment you've shared, thank you
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Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
3rd May 2022 10:11pm
🙏-much thanks for leaving your thoughts with me!
I'm so grateful you found some resonance here...
🌹 - 💙
B
I'm so grateful you found some resonance here...
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Just, Breathe.
4th May 2022 3:35pm
Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
4th May 2022 4:01pm
I'm doing well and I hope you are too, W6 ;)
Thanks for stopping by - glad you enjoyed!
🌹 - 💙
B
Thanks for stopping by - glad you enjoyed!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Just, Breathe.
21st May 2022 2:09am
and if you can't leave, meditate a vision of the place of your dreams instead, if that's all that you have, which is my story in this case. thoroughly enjoyed your adventures in the sand.
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Re. Just, Breathe.
Anonymous
14th Jun 2022 00:33am
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Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
14th Jun 2022 1:35am
Thanks, I appreciate the comment. .... here's one maybe more akin to your liking... and one of my more recent sw attempts.... still learning and trying to improve.... no need to comment or anything, just wanted to share...
;)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/438201-how-sleeping-beasts-stir-to-a-rouse-a/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/445370-artful-ascension/
;)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/438201-how-sleeping-beasts-stir-to-a-rouse-a/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/445370-artful-ascension/
Re. Just, Breathe.
17th Jun 2022 9:21pm
Beautiful spill Blue. It's awesome to find a special spot to visit, to get away, gather your thoughts and compose such a stunning poem.
Amazing.
Amazing.
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Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
17th Jun 2022 9:25pm
Yes, it really is, Walter... It's your own little secret writing boost!
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, the generous list and for just getting it!
💙-B
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, the generous list and for just getting it!
💙-B
Re. Just, Breathe.
2nd Nov 2022 10:31am
What I like about your poems is the variety and talk on different topics
Whenever I read something to you, I am amazed at the way you communicate your feelings to the reader
I live with your poems as if I lived those facts with you
thank you my friend
love and peace
Whenever I read something to you, I am amazed at the way you communicate your feelings to the reader
I live with your poems as if I lived those facts with you
thank you my friend
love and peace
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Re: Re. Just, Breathe.
2nd Nov 2022 12:19pm
That's a beautiful compliment and a really insightful way to explain the experience you have when reading, MP. It's incredible to know that you can feel those depths of emotional awareness and appreciate them like you have.
I take pride in mixing up what I write about. I think closing yourself off to variety eventually causes you to become stagnant.... That's something I hope to never become.
It's a joy and very motivational to see you this morning, my friend.
I hope the day takes you to wonderful places.
Much love and warm regards,
🌹 💙
B
I take pride in mixing up what I write about. I think closing yourself off to variety eventually causes you to become stagnant.... That's something I hope to never become.
It's a joy and very motivational to see you this morning, my friend.
I hope the day takes you to wonderful places.
Much love and warm regards,
🌹 💙
B