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Spasm.
CLUTCHING air in sought out tranquility
Eyes rolled back into something so BRIGHT
SEARING the corneas to blind with secrets
JERKING BACK the body stiffens
Muscles TAUGHT and oh so TIGHT
A thin wail in the space that ISN'T present
Hissing out the noise and becoming CAUGHT in airways
Terrible
Frozen
Mind-numbing
Spasm.
Eyes rolled back into something so BRIGHT
SEARING the corneas to blind with secrets
JERKING BACK the body stiffens
Muscles TAUGHT and oh so TIGHT
A thin wail in the space that ISN'T present
Hissing out the noise and becoming CAUGHT in airways
Terrible
Frozen
Mind-numbing
Spasm.
Published 15th Mar 2012
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15th Mar 2012 2:58am
of helplessness.
It is good that you just left the feelings and sensations rather than mix it up with obscure colors and/or sounds (rather than the hissing - but that again contributes to the anxiety)
Well done
It is good that you just left the feelings and sensations rather than mix it up with obscure colors and/or sounds (rather than the hissing - but that again contributes to the anxiety)
Well done
15th Mar 2012 7:44pm
...."point" (hell, i don't know from 'points', pointless as eye pur'fur 2be)...wit bre'vity....
"Ars Longa, Vita Breva"
"Ars Longa, Vita Breva"
16th Mar 2012 12:19pm
In essence, if we want to direct our lives, we must take control of our consistent actions. It's not what we do once in a while that shapes our lives, but what we do consistently. Some spasms is in search of an uncontrolable situations.
