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Four Walls
Watching a random woman
with raised arms
scream crazily at a
concert made me realize
that I have never been that
excited about anything.
Anxiety and I left the venue
and went home.
Where we belong.
with raised arms
scream crazily at a
concert made me realize
that I have never been that
excited about anything.
Anxiety and I left the venue
and went home.
Where we belong.
Published 14th Apr 2022
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14th Apr 2022 7:36pm
Hoi hoi!
I hope this finds you well.
This poems resonates with me immensely.
Being a man of simple pleasures, I like and enjoy a lot of different forms of art. And very much so.
That goes for your poem too.
Thank you for posting it.
When I figure out how to follow you, I will. If you’ll have me in your tribe, that is.
Kind regards, Gus
I hope this finds you well.
This poems resonates with me immensely.
Being a man of simple pleasures, I like and enjoy a lot of different forms of art. And very much so.
That goes for your poem too.
Thank you for posting it.
When I figure out how to follow you, I will. If you’ll have me in your tribe, that is.
Kind regards, Gus
This reminds me of the first concert I went to. Aerosmith!!
Was awesome and outdoors so I didn't
have that claustrophobic feeling.
The closing song was
Train kept a-rolling!!
Also, love the pic!!
Was awesome and outdoors so I didn't
have that claustrophobic feeling.
The closing song was
Train kept a-rolling!!
Also, love the pic!!
15th Apr 2022 9:07am
Dear N,
For this poem I would consider crazily flailing my arms and screaming in solidarity. I continue to be awed by your outstanding ability to say something so powerfully and so succinctly! Great write. H🌷
For this poem I would consider crazily flailing my arms and screaming in solidarity. I continue to be awed by your outstanding ability to say something so powerfully and so succinctly! Great write. H🌷
13th Jun 2022 6:11pm
Gotta love those pieces that look within and spill so honestly, and non-chalantly.
Awesome work.
Awesome work.
