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The Alone And Forgotten Heart
The Alone And Forgotten Heart
Whose heart is that? I think I know.
Its owner is quite sad though.
It really is a tale of woe,
I watch him frown. I cry hello.
He gives his heart a shake,
And sobs until the tears make.
The only other sound's the break,
Of distant waves and birds awake.
The heart is alone, forgotten and deep,
But he has promises to keep,
Until then he shall not sleep.
He lies in bed with ducts that weep.
He rises from his bitter bed,
With thoughts of sadness in his head,
He idolises being dead.
Facing the day with never ending dread.
Whose heart is that? I think I know.
Its owner is quite sad though.
It really is a tale of woe,
I watch him frown. I cry hello.
He gives his heart a shake,
And sobs until the tears make.
The only other sound's the break,
Of distant waves and birds awake.
The heart is alone, forgotten and deep,
But he has promises to keep,
Until then he shall not sleep.
He lies in bed with ducts that weep.
He rises from his bitter bed,
With thoughts of sadness in his head,
He idolises being dead.
Facing the day with never ending dread.
Published 3rd Apr 2022
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4th May 2022 9:09am
hello
you capture lonliness and longing perfectly in this.
I really like the lyrical rhyme scheme too
Good stuff here!
Al
you capture lonliness and longing perfectly in this.
I really like the lyrical rhyme scheme too
Good stuff here!
Al
25th May 2022 3:39am
Sorry for the late reply,havny been on consistently. but thank you so much :3
