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Wrong Address
I’d like to have a conversation with God,
but I’m worried that once I arrived for my appointment
she’d take one look at me and say I had the wrong address.
but I’m worried that once I arrived for my appointment
she’d take one look at me and say I had the wrong address.
Published 20th Mar 2022
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20th Mar 2022 7:11pm
Hello there
I kinda laughed at the wry quality of this, and that’s not a bad thing.
First of all, loving the thought that you turned God into a woman. Secondly, the thought is so vulnerable, it communicates this genuine fear of rejection, and that comes across as very human.
Thanks for sharing this. I do enjoy these little pieces.
-M
I kinda laughed at the wry quality of this, and that’s not a bad thing.
First of all, loving the thought that you turned God into a woman. Secondly, the thought is so vulnerable, it communicates this genuine fear of rejection, and that comes across as very human.
Thanks for sharing this. I do enjoy these little pieces.
-M
24th Mar 2022 12:20pm
There's such poignant truth along with a wry openness that engages..... karmic alignment is often inevitable!
Wonderfully penned
A pleasure to read
🌹 - B
Wonderfully penned
A pleasure to read
🌹 - B
