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Unforgiving Pain
I have overcome the pain!
…so I thought
Until that song is played again.
I find a knot building up in my throat,
as I skip through the notes.
I can’t fast forward the memory,
It’s dug in…
At this point
I can’t retreat!
The song isn’t playing,
but my suffering is on repeat!
I don’t understand why
cause
I’m out of love with him…
Why can’t I fall out of the hurt?
I guess pain stays
long after
love is gone!!!
Poetisa María de Jesús
2/28/2022
…so I thought
Until that song is played again.
I find a knot building up in my throat,
as I skip through the notes.
I can’t fast forward the memory,
It’s dug in…
At this point
I can’t retreat!
The song isn’t playing,
but my suffering is on repeat!
I don’t understand why
cause
I’m out of love with him…
Why can’t I fall out of the hurt?
I guess pain stays
long after
love is gone!!!
Poetisa María de Jesús
2/28/2022
Published 1st Mar 2022
Author's Note
There are still songs I can’t listen to.
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- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
1st Mar 2022 1:58am
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1st Mar 2022 2:11am
1st Mar 2022 2:46am
Yes it does, the deeper the love was the longer the pain remains. Great flow to the piece, sad but light at the sames times, flowing like notes. Tight work Lady
1st Mar 2022 2:58am
2nd Mar 2022 4:00pm
It's crazy how a cord from a plucked string or a breeze of an old smell can transport your brain back to the place you fought so hard to leave. It's beauty in it though. Love is so precious so rare that's why when it no longer in our possession it feels like our soul has been evicted from our heart . Good writing
2nd Mar 2022 5:22pm
2nd Mar 2022 5:41pm
