All Dreams

Ohhh S -  
So so many sigh worthy moments of tenderness, hope and possibility... Not this pseudo perfect (cuz there's no such thing) kind but that kind of hopefulness that permeates into your essence because another person on this planet gets it. Meaning, they get you... it's not often that we're fully seen and loved, 'warts and all.' Being fully understood in our deepest desires and still having an enchanted way with each other's minds and hearts, is rare. Finding someone who speaks the same 'foreign language', be it music, poetry or whatever unites, becomes so sacred and hallowed...it's that sort of connection where dreams can potentially come true....or at least within grasp.  
 
Your last two lines are poetic gold that stay with you echoing far after reading...  
 
and oh how I love feeling the vibrations.
 
Excellent ink, my friend 🙏🏻  
🌹-B

Good morning BV.  
Thank you dear friend, for your depthereal comment. (Yes I made that word up!)  
Like i said, being writers on a site forms kinships.  And we all must contribute,to continue the circle.  We hopefully feed from each other, and get motivation.
  I myself will never get tired of reading what other writers contribute.  The ones that effect me are soothing and thought inducing.  It's peace.  I need it.  

you have finely tuned
your way with words here to build
something quite special

Hey you.
Thank you for the wonderful comment.  
I was trying for an old school vibe, when things were written with paper and pen.  
Sometimes, the "old ways" still work best, because it has its own way of flowing, so to speak. Writing things out has a sort of physical contact involved, whereas the tap tap of keyboards is mundane to the hand.  No "flow" connecting to the brain.  

  I think I think too much. Lol

This is quite an outpour of the soul. Everything meshed so well together.
The letter only to be burned the further down I read. Silent paper songs then
in closing playing songs she has written to lead her back home. You got the circle down
to an artform. You even included a soft zoo animal metaphor!!! ha:)

Just so lovely:)

Thank you kindly, for your sweet reply!   Hope where ever you're wintering, you're warm!

It takes a lot for me to captivated by a narrative throughout, but this was strong. It feels intimate. I always feel the mark of a good poem is how much we feel like a voyeur and how much we feel part of it.

This was all of the above and more. Thank you for sharing.

-M

Thank you, Missy. It is much appreciated.  And good to see you back around.

I'm working on a new short story, so I'm posting some older poems in here to feed the beast that is DUP.  

I enjoyed where this lead up to and how it ended Styxian.  Beautiful write.

LJ

Hiya Lj.

Thank you for the comment and bringing this one forward.  I did some cleaning out here (obviously) but kept this one up because of the awesome recital that Missy did with it, in the poet podcast (?)  .  She really made it ten times better.  
 
I hope you're doing well!  I'm also looking forward to catching up soon, on your stuff, as well as some others.  You write great stuff.

Wow awesome muse well expressed in a fine poetic way, eloquent phrasings and i loved the 'moon wads it up..' line so much. Kudos for the fab poem!


Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

Hello Styxian. I decided to go back to your very 1st poem written here. I usually do this with people that have numerous poems and have been with DUP for a while. Your poem is enthralling. Full of emotion and well written.

Well thank you.  I also tend to read back a few (or more) of the writes of someone that piques my interest.  It's our portrait of what we represent here.  
I appreciate your comment greatly.  It's nice to have an old one highlighted again . Thank you.

Hello Styxian.  I decided to go back to your 1st poem, since you've been with DUP for a while. This is an amazing poem. Worded just write. Beautiful flow.