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depravity
devious touches speak to the soul of me
deeply reach in and feel my heart
sending out a message of lust
I can't bear the heat
I can't bear to back out
dip deeper fill my hollow spaces
in the depths of depravity you find me
stirring in the madness
creating chaos
I am under your spell
god damn you for bringing me here
I'm losing my mind for the feel of you
I lust in crimson
aching passion pulses
I succumb once again
crawling on my knees to your darkness
losing myself in your insanity
together we scream
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Re. depravity
18th Feb 2022 6:59pm
Re: Re. depravity
20th Feb 2022 10:24pm
thank you graciously dearest Ron love and light my friend you are ever beautiful 💕
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20th Feb 2022 10:25pm
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20th Feb 2022 11:41pm
Re. depravity
19th Feb 2022 3:21am
“I lust in crimson” is a gem of a line!!! Hope you use it again bc that part alone is worth reading repeatedly.
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20th Feb 2022 10:26pm
hello beautiful Ruby thank you graciously you gifted me smiles with your comment 💕
Re. depravity
19th Feb 2022 7:34am
She in the picture looks like Jane Birkin when younger. The poem could be read to background music of her song 'Je t'aime'.
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Re: Re. depravity
20th Feb 2022 10:30pm
hi dearest Solomon you're right... I loved the picture when I saw I felt the deep need in her gaze... it just fit with the poem I'm happy it worked for you 💕
Re. depravity
19th Feb 2022 7:44am
Extremely powerful, Crimsin.
I can feel the words reaching
into the depths of the senses, and bringing to the surface, meanings perviously unrealized...
Culminating in a reason that is
beyond the mundane... In the realm of the gods.
I was actually going to do a write about "depravity"...
Perhaps a different perspective...
I got pizza, Mountain Dew, and Hershey Kisses. :))). earlier and was watching the movie "Joker"...
(Havent seen it since I saw it at the theatre.)
And I was just... Thinking...
I scribbled this note to myself:
[that last med bottle
spinss on the table
as though
Deciding which depraved act to do]
Hope you are well.
Always enjoy your pieces.
I can feel the words reaching
into the depths of the senses, and bringing to the surface, meanings perviously unrealized...
Culminating in a reason that is
beyond the mundane... In the realm of the gods.
I was actually going to do a write about "depravity"...
Perhaps a different perspective...
I got pizza, Mountain Dew, and Hershey Kisses. :))). earlier and was watching the movie "Joker"...
(Havent seen it since I saw it at the theatre.)
And I was just... Thinking...
I scribbled this note to myself:
[that last med bottle
spinss on the table
as though
Deciding which depraved act to do]
Hope you are well.
Always enjoy your pieces.
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Re: Re. depravity
20th Feb 2022 10:35pm
good afternoon dearest Cipher you know what would be interesting if you were open to the idea is writing together you and I... I'm curious what would come into being now after some time has passed...I haven't seen the whole Joker movie only parts maybe aspects of his personality reminded me of myself and I got sad...also I have difficulties sitting still for movies these days I'm locked out of books and films two things I still love but don't fully have keys to those worlds any longer...I would love to see your thoughts on depravity...I love the med bottle stanza you should finish the thought I love it ❤️
Re. depravity
19th Feb 2022 9:27am
Re: Re. depravity
20th Feb 2022 10:37pm
hello dearest FeNyX I don't know about it being the hot topic for the day I didn't do any reading this day... it's funny though how us poets can be on the same wavelength... thank you for the love 💕
Re. depravity
10th Mar 2022 4:31pm
It's a titillating spill, leaving us to wonder just how hot this is and yet wanting more.
Well done.
Well done.
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