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sorrow's soul
I am nothing without the breath of you in my soul
keeping note of my joys and pain
touching the dawning light of me
you see so much I don't see
little affections in a smile
tender epiphanies to my being
I enter into an understanding I'm in love with you
my feelings instruct my heart what to do
I'm amazed by the man you are
my honesty reaches you
telling you how I feel with a blush
the honor in your soul says wait
my gaze caresses your thoughts
you know the time is right
you move into me
immersing yourself in my faith
stroking your sorrow I know
we're a perfect fit heart and soul
Published 16th Feb 2022
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16th Feb 2022 4:26am
I much prefer that side. Ok sometimes you come with very dark stuff and that is ok too. This piece is oh so very soft and lovely. And the picture is a man's dream..........Kisses, Robert.
20th Feb 2022 10:01pm
hi there dearest Robert thank you for witnessing this soft side of me... really I am gentle... as for my darkness it rises and I use it to create with... it's not always my taste either but I can't suppress it or I wouldn't write you know... I deeply appreciate your honest thoughts 💕
16th Feb 2022 6:57am
So lovely, floaty write. Absolutely awesome
Love this stuff
Love and light
Ron xx
Love this stuff
Love and light
Ron xx
20th Feb 2022 10:02pm
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16th Feb 2022 12:08pm
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20th Feb 2022 10:03pm
16th Feb 2022 12:35pm
Mutual support is so needed and often so missing.
Displaying it brings it to mind.. role models it...
Displaying it brings it to mind.. role models it...
20th Feb 2022 10:05pm
so true dearest RT I think we do our best maybe even sometimes our worst... outside stressors change things too...perhaps I write what I wish was true sometimes... a dream.... thank you for reading ❤️
20th Feb 2022 11:40pm
19th Feb 2022 3:14pm
One day of light turns all dark days to only gray.
This poem of yours did just that.
Have your dark days/poems, as long as you have the one day of light poems.
It's a shield.
What a wonderful write.
This poem of yours did just that.
Have your dark days/poems, as long as you have the one day of light poems.
It's a shield.
What a wonderful write.
20th Feb 2022 10:07pm
hello dearest Styxian such a poetic and deep comment thank you for the advise I don't know where the darkness comes from but come it does... I try to keep a balance but I fail sometimes... I deeply appreciate your thoughtfulness 💕
10th Mar 2022 00:45am
What soul mates declare and feel. "I am nothing without the breath of you in my soul" Beautifully stated crimsin.
