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Memories
Time swiftly passes by,
selfishly not thinking of its victims,
unwilling to slow down.
I remember when we first met,
but time went by so quickly.
And now all we have is memories,
Celebrations and tragedies,
Will only be remembered,
by fragments of our minds.
Time swiftly passes by,
cruelly devouring the aging process,
unwilling to slow down.
I remember when we first met,
but time only slows down,
when its not worth having.
And now all we have is memories,
Celebrations and tragedies,
Will only ever be remembered,
by fragments of our minds.
selfishly not thinking of its victims,
unwilling to slow down.
I remember when we first met,
but time went by so quickly.
And now all we have is memories,
Celebrations and tragedies,
Will only be remembered,
by fragments of our minds.
Time swiftly passes by,
cruelly devouring the aging process,
unwilling to slow down.
I remember when we first met,
but time only slows down,
when its not worth having.
And now all we have is memories,
Celebrations and tragedies,
Will only ever be remembered,
by fragments of our minds.
Published 10th Mar 2012
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12th Mar 2012 9:31pm
I the way you wrote this. The 1st and 3rd paragraph take you back to the start, but have different points to them. The 2nd and 4th move you forward. Great write.
16th Mar 2012 4:08am
It has a nice touch of ever reminiscences of memories. But I feel something is still missing to complete the essence of memory. But still, I like you work.
