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Serenade of a Young Nymph
I want to look
Inside your dreams
Those rare times
When sleeps cascades
Resting in your beauty
Serenade of a young nymph
Languid and beguiling
I watch you from afar
I pine for your touch
But I let you sleep
A gift
A treasure
Morning awaits
Vibrant
Effervescent
Transcendent
Inside your dreams
Those rare times
When sleeps cascades
Resting in your beauty
Serenade of a young nymph
Languid and beguiling
I watch you from afar
I pine for your touch
But I let you sleep
A gift
A treasure
Morning awaits
Vibrant
Effervescent
Transcendent
Author's Note
Gouache Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
2nd Feb 2022 11:43pm
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Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
3rd Feb 2022 1:57am
Oh, this is so soft to the mind my Big Apple... I do admire a roaming tiger who can rest his strips for one single moment in time to appreciate the romantic side of his nature... This is nicely composed, as is your accompanying work of art, which speaks its reflective volumes in exquisite taste
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Re: Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
3rd Feb 2022 2:42am
You got exactly what I was going for...
I was inspired by a moment and took it from there.
How well you know the Apple spirit
Much obliged
A lovely comment indeed ...
Thank you !
I was inspired by a moment and took it from there.
How well you know the Apple spirit
Much obliged
A lovely comment indeed ...
Thank you !
Re: Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
3rd Feb 2022 2:43am
Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
3rd Feb 2022 3:22am
good evening dearest Poet
this is so tender I could picture you watching your sleeping nymph
something so endearing about that...
on a side note I was on a drive and I fell asleep with my puppy in my lap
my husband said he watched me adoringly for a long time smiles...
hope you're enjoying your evening...
beautiful write...
this is so tender I could picture you watching your sleeping nymph
something so endearing about that...
on a side note I was on a drive and I fell asleep with my puppy in my lap
my husband said he watched me adoringly for a long time smiles...
hope you're enjoying your evening...
beautiful write...
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Re: Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
3rd Feb 2022 3:47am
Sometimes they come so easily
Almost write themselves
Other times I could never imagine myself writing this way
Beautiful thoughts about you and your pup
Many thanks Brenda
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Almost write themselves
Other times I could never imagine myself writing this way
Beautiful thoughts about you and your pup
Many thanks Brenda
X
Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
3rd Feb 2022 7:22pm
Hey PS
I love when they write themselves. haha
So true. You can just feel the flow of words pouring
down your arm.
This is so beautiful to read.
Love all the diversity in your stuff.
Never know what you're going to get.
Like a box of chocolates (yes I just quoted Forest Gump:)
Stay warm amigo!!!
I love when they write themselves. haha
So true. You can just feel the flow of words pouring
down your arm.
This is so beautiful to read.
Love all the diversity in your stuff.
Never know what you're going to get.
Like a box of chocolates (yes I just quoted Forest Gump:)
Stay warm amigo!!!
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Re: Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
The amigo is warm and toasty, sitting next to the radiator.
Did a fast walk in the rain today. Same route daily, cardio and all that...
The words come and I dash them out
You're praise warms me
Thx A
You're the best 👌
Did a fast walk in the rain today. Same route daily, cardio and all that...
The words come and I dash them out
You're praise warms me
Thx A
You're the best 👌
Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
7th Feb 2022 5:30pm
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7th Feb 2022 9:33pm
Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
11th Feb 2022 2:08am
Re: Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
11th Feb 2022 2:18am
I hardly ever write like this so it gives me great joy to get your comment
Thank you Billy
Thank you Billy
Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
7th Mar 2022 4:14pm
Awe, the essence, the presence of beauty and youth. The colors are vibrant and palpable.
BIG LIKE.
BIG LIKE.
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Re: Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
7th Mar 2022 5:05pm
It was fun to try this kind of floaty writing.
Not my usual offering.
Dig you comment Wally
BIG THANKS
Not my usual offering.
Dig you comment Wally
BIG THANKS
Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
15th Mar 2022 2:13am
So nicely penned. A gentle note to lay upon her pillow?
I love love this type of "loving observation" poetry. It's like you want to leave them a gift, to commemorate the moment, so you give this. And I'm quite sure that it would be cherished.
Beautiful words.
I love love this type of "loving observation" poetry. It's like you want to leave them a gift, to commemorate the moment, so you give this. And I'm quite sure that it would be cherished.
Beautiful words.
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Re: Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
15th Mar 2022 2:21am
This is a high honor to receive your praise on this one
I don’t ordinarily write like this and it was a leap of faith
Thx so much !!
I don’t ordinarily write like this and it was a leap of faith
Thx so much !!
Re: Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
15th Mar 2022 2:41am
I read enough of your material to know it doesn't take a leap of faith for you. You have the skills already. Follow your thoughts and you won't be misled. It's a good "type" for you, btw. You did it well!
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Re: Re. Serenade of a Young Nymph
15th Mar 2022 11:53am
Thanks again Styxian
I took a bit of a break from here but now I'm back selectively...
This one didn't get a lot of play originally but it picked up speed eventually.
Thx so much for your comments
I really enjoyed your last entry !
I took a bit of a break from here but now I'm back selectively...
This one didn't get a lot of play originally but it picked up speed eventually.
Thx so much for your comments
I really enjoyed your last entry !