Lost and (pro)found (a submissive tale of enlightenment)

enlightenenment
that is found
in the knowing
that pain
can bring
pleasures pure

written
welts
on skin
poetic
maddening
strokes

body and soul
pushing through
boundaries
giving the
senses a
new universe

sectets
revealed
like braille
fingertips
read the passion
of sibmission

recalling
silence
wetted violence
of forced
euphoria
of orgasm

Epic epic poem-ply!!  
I love relishing in your poetic spin- your pov.. It's so cleverly crafted in the spur of the moment—just astounding, that instant creation is!! ... Truly mind blowing! 🤯  
 
Thank you so much for sharing your quick wits and enormous talents here with me, C.  
 
I'm deeply appreciative!  
🌹-💙 - ✨  
xo  
B

Hey there, lovely Selina ;)
Your chosen lines are truly some of my favorite, too. They're probably the most blatant, non metaphoric lines in the poem; adding a little bit of color to some deep personal truths.

You're incredibly kind and endearing with your welcomed confession of being a 'smitten kitten'!!
I totally relate and I'm so humbly grateful for those honest, cute and thoughtful comments, my dear!

Warmest thanks and appreciation,
🌹 - 💙
xo
B

💋🐾💋🐾💋🐾💋

OOOOOOOH SPANK ME
So love this, great job gorgeous
Love and light
Ron xx

hahaha...  
I'm so glad you enjoyed reading and that you found some small delights ....  
 
 
Thank you for visiting and taking the time.  
🌹 - 💙  
xo  
B

Enjoy the wild ride of orgasmic bliss.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

Ohhh I definitely do and will and plan to continue to do so.... Thanks for being a faithful reader, Francisco... I deeply appreciate it.

🌹 -

Then keep going all night and morning long,  LOL.

As an investigator, I'd like to pursue this case. Wow. Another off the charts by the amazing poet. Hugs and kisses, (O)

🕵🏻
Ohhh yes, but please do be deliberate and thorough!! No hurrying or rushing you judgements.... lol (I tease)... Really amazing compliment/comments, dear Oral.

How did I get so fortunate?

🌹 - 💙
xo
B

So many excellent lines within this.  The vivid images sparked by your word choices are countless, and a carousel of thoughts.  
Wonderful to read, and warmth on a cold day.

♨️♨️♨️  
I'm glad you enjoyed and felt some heat, permeating, S  
 
You already know how much I love your visits but to reiterate....—they're true bits of loveliness.  
Deep thanks, my friend 🙏🏻  
🌹 - 💙  
xo  
B

Beautiful on many levels.

I love this phraseIt's
when absent-minded fingertips wander
to retrace the evidence
Reliving. It.
Ohh such delicious recall...

Like you read my thoughts.
❣️🙏🏼

Thank you for seeing the beauty, KP. I often wonder if my writing is becoming stale or repetitive, so I very much appreciate your thoughtful comments.....I enjoy being a bit of a mind reader.... ;)  
🌹 - 💙  


The reliving it, the evidential proof, being marked as his....

titillating read B....love the total abandon ...L

Thanks for the lovely comments, L.... I'm thrilled you felt my words....


It's always a pleasure ✨
🌹 - 💙
—B

Submission is its own reward....

A solution to the unquestionable....

I was excited to see you on my page, RT!  Thank you for visiting, you've been missed. ;) I definitely believe my choice to be a submissive is incredibly rewarding , indeed. I'm still a work in progress... so there's never an end to my education.  

A solution that speaks to my very nature, where my deep need to please and a personal proclivity that grew into a beautiful lifestyle made my life fuller and happier.  

(sorry if I didn't understand!)  

I always look forward to your thoughts, I'm tremendously grateful you shared them with me  

Warm regards,  
🌹 - B

Your trajectory feeds my own theory. I don't believe we can actually choose who we are. But we can choose to reveal it to ourselves. My belief is that we are or are not submissive, dominant, or gay for that matter. I think as human beings we take on or else fight our nature. Finally finding your point of equilibrium is a part of following instinct.  Submission is the more powerful position because it circumscribes the arena of dominance. That you know yourself empowers both. No domming from the bottom
..being natural to yourself you bond with your complement. That is a morsel to chew on.

I appreciate the info
you've left for me to gnaw on!  
;))
 

Boobies tend to catch my attention, too!! 😏 😈 😋

Thanks for visiting, Tim!! I truly love how you could feel the blissful nature within, it was definitely part of what I'd hoped to convey.....

I deeply appreciate you sharing your thoughts with me,it's always a pleasure ✨
🌹 - 💙
B

As in the photo, I checked your forehead temperature. The only fever you have is submissive lust fever. Step into my office for the cure.

Enjoyed your poem - Not only do you mention the feelings in the moment, but also the reminiscences brought on by memories, visual and mental marks, and ooohh that good soreness and lingering ache.

lol.... I hope by 'office' you were meaning playroom or perhaps even cute little dungeon.... either, will do very nicely.  ;p  
 
Yes, yes and Ohhh my, Yesss!! ...It's my delicious physical urge that gets compounded when reminiscing ... remembering I'm his... and reliving certain events and particular moments - that even after, can still feel so viscerally aware with deep pleasure.... via the marks and beautiful tenderness left on my body....  
   
Exquisite, is the recall.

I love the art. Keep up the good work💜

Thanks for stopping by and for leaving me your thoughts....
I appreciate the encouragement!


🌹 - B

Wonderful establishing of place/setting, deeply engaging the
senses, at every turn.

I greatly admire your ability to delve so very deeply
into the symbolic, thereby, generating a revelation.

Which then returns to the symbolic, in the mind of the reader,
taking on the forms of revelations, constantly revealed.

(Oh shit...  I was thinking of a piece on fractals...

I jotted down the lines:

Fractals of flames
Devour the surface of the eyes.)

I feel like this is taking me deeper into the vision.  Totally cool.

[dual enlightenment]

That's way heavy.

This is such a an amazing piece, B.

You put a lovely bit of oomph in my motivational needs and really fire up my sense of self worth, my dear soul.


Thanks for finding a bit of inspiration here!! 👍🏻
I'm super stoked you liked it.

Likewise, you amaze me too!
🌹 - 💙
xo
B

Splendid write… fully captures the essence of power exchange… seducing… entrancing… a poetic tour de force… with all of your poeting hallmarks in symphony…

Thanks (and I'm totally grateful) for you seeing what your keen eye sees in me, LilD. I'm beyond delighted and humbled that you felt what you described.... Day. Made.

I am loving all your creativity that's flowing from your ski trip... It's been truly fantastic to see what new inspirations are harnessed.... Captivating!  

I deeply appreciate you stopping by -  
🌹 - 💙  
B

Your poetry is great, illustrations blend with the lines to make it all the more sensual. Kind of feel that haze when the mind starts getting into the erotic state..:)

Hey there, kumar007 ;)
I've not come across your kind visits before, so I'm so glad you decided to drop by. Welcome! 🦋

Your kind words immediately take me back into that heightened state of 'hazy' arousal... a delicious hinted awareness of submittal.... the enormously erogenous nature that engulfs me completely when I'm in the midst such consensual erotic play....

I am delighted that you found something that resonates and entices. That's truly wonderful for me to read. I humbly thank you for sharing those thoughts with me, it meant a lot

Please don't be a stranger!
🌹 - 💙
B

Thanks!

Wow, just wow. (as file away in special RL folder). ☺️

Lmfao!!
I need to get a peek into that folder!!!
haha 😂

Thanks, W
I'm delighted it made the cut!
🌹 - 💙
x

wow..just happened to find this vignette !
achingly arresting and yet submissive-ably spunky; the persuasive visualization reverberates much more deeply once the words are seared ubiquitously over our unmasked naked minds .
precisely bound - wish you many more such soft orgasms B :)
much love and care.

Thank you for stopping by and for sharing your thoughts with me, it's much appreciated

I'm glad you enjoyed.

🌹 - B

An ensemble both vocal and tactile with sensuality exploding across your words. I float in the timelessness of your submission that sails me deeper into mysterious waters where I long to explore. There is magic here that I dive into and feel across my secret windows of desire. Each moment I bathe in your poetics I feel the oncoming wave of heat. And there is where I find paradise.

Xo
John

John,
I had actually forgotten about this poem and absolutely loved how your remarks allowed me to re-explore right along with you the depths of my need and innermost sensual desires. There's a drive and a self awareness that I've learned about myself that craves this fetishistic journey and I make no apologies for how I need what it is I need to be fully sated. I love how you too, feel the magic of BDSM and it's obvious enticements. What an exciting and beautiful admission, imo.

My heart soars, knowing you found a little bit of paradise here within my words.

Thank you for sharing with me, my dear.
You've renewed and reinvigorated!
🌹 💙
-Susan