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The author encourages honest critique.
20th Jan 2022 2:08pm
This is a beautiful picture of passion. Makes me want to write a short story to help fulfill the young lady's wish.
Beautiful picture of passion pictorially and in verse, of beautiful people on a beautiful Californian beach making beautifully passionate love. Favourite verse the last one - especially 'with your resolute desires holding fast inside me'.
21st Jan 2022 2:17pm
Your writing coils around my very being, tenderly caresses all my secret erogenous zones within my mind's eye..... I just absolutely love your style and creative essence.... It's always a deep pleasure ✨
Thank you for sharing
🌹 - 💙
B
Thank you for sharing
🌹 - 💙
B
31st Jan 2022 1:59pm
Sorry I'm slow to respond. Your comments mean so much to me! Thank you for your kind and encouraging words.
2nd Mar 2022 10:35am
Hello N,
A beautiful journey of deam, desire, fire and passion that never ceases but to burn with it and be remwbwred by the lovers for ages. I love the poem with it's mystic style.
Love
KS
A beautiful journey of deam, desire, fire and passion that never ceases but to burn with it and be remwbwred by the lovers for ages. I love the poem with it's mystic style.
Love
KS
6th Sep 2022 1:21am
There have been so many of these "incidents" over time all over the globe.
It's a different type of pandemic.
There are no questions when the cause of death is recorded as a heart attack.
It's a different type of pandemic.
There are no questions when the cause of death is recorded as a heart attack.
