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When Last We Touched
Written by
LostViking
(Lost Viking)
Published 19th Jan 2022
| Edited 18th Feb 2022
Author's Note
I'm still haunted with regret for my adolescent self after years have passed. Pleased that this was selected as Runner Up on the January Visual Poetry Competition.
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Re. When Last We Touched
20th Jan 2022 00:50am
Re. When Last We Touched
20th Jan 2022 00:59am
This says a lot about your capacity to care that you give teenage judgment errors a second thought. The only people I know who have no regrets from those know-it-all years are those who never outgrew them. This poem expresses a feeling so many of us have felt—that realization that an action has hurt another and the sorrow felt in that knowledge. Very well expressed! 🥰
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Re: Re. When Last We Touched
20th Jan 2022 1:15am
When I saw the topic of regret, I had trouble deciding which one to write about:) Your kind comment meant a lot to me. Thank you for reading and sharing your thought.
Re. When Last We Touched
20th Jan 2022 1:58am
Regret is hard. Especially when it happens when we are younger. We have the rest of our lives to live with it.
That's a long time. I really felt this and your remorse.
Acknowledgement matters and we learn from it. Hard as it is.
That's a long time. I really felt this and your remorse.
Acknowledgement matters and we learn from it. Hard as it is.
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Re: Re. When Last We Touched
Thank you for your kind and wise comment. Means a lot to me to realize others can identify with these feelings of regret.
Re. When Last We Touched
20th Jan 2022 2:05pm
This is beautiful and reminds me of past regrets. But, I suppose there are still pleasures to be found in remorse:)
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Re: Re. When Last We Touched
20th Jan 2022 2:10pm
Yes. This precious one that haunts me with regret also brings pleasures in my remembering.
Re. When Last We Touched
22nd Jan 2022 9:28pm
Yes, as Sinatra sang, "Regrets? I've had a few." Thanks for reminding us of our humanity. Hugs and peace,, (O)
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