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This poem's loadedness

...  
 
The interruption of inspiration
The incursion of different thoughts
And I cannot provide justification for my refusal
So ...  
An outside source  
Passivity coming unsolicited...
From an outside observer...  
Lying in the role assigning...
... Of this poem to me  
So...
Looks like conversational moves...
Moves that I have to introduce or follow
Oh, it is so hollow
This poem's loadedness...
No-one is more aware than me...
Of how word choice is monitored...
... To catch me as a writer
So...  
 
... ... ...
Written by Marks
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