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Till Death Do Us Part
one day we will reach the light before i cry
beside my love, i just watched you die.
days we were close
were your heart beats close to mine.
looking into your eyes for the very last time.
maby in life you will whip my tears,
to whisper you love me in my ears.
and with your hands you'll run threw my hair,
looking in your eyes i smile and stare
Its fragrance shielding off despair,
to remember beyond death
the softness of your lips and the sweetness of your breath.
and while i hold you close and near,
till death do us part your spirit appear.
The breath from my kiss will take you away
And so you are gone without delay.
many years will come and ill feel your embrace,
no other love will take the shape of your face.
-Kumiko Yamamoto
beside my love, i just watched you die.
days we were close
were your heart beats close to mine.
looking into your eyes for the very last time.
maby in life you will whip my tears,
to whisper you love me in my ears.
and with your hands you'll run threw my hair,
looking in your eyes i smile and stare
Its fragrance shielding off despair,
to remember beyond death
the softness of your lips and the sweetness of your breath.
and while i hold you close and near,
till death do us part your spirit appear.
The breath from my kiss will take you away
And so you are gone without delay.
many years will come and ill feel your embrace,
no other love will take the shape of your face.
-Kumiko Yamamoto
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wow....
8th Mar 2012 5:04am
that was Beautiful & sweet
i could hear your heart speak
those words come from the Soul
about a Love thats never cold
& such things put a smile on my face
because the message moves at Love's pace....;)
i could hear your heart speak
those words come from the Soul
about a Love thats never cold
& such things put a smile on my face
because the message moves at Love's pace....;)
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re: wow....
8th Mar 2012 5:12am
Undiscribable
8th Mar 2012 5:31am
It touched the heart and soul is as close as I can get.
The rhyme in it is really good and adds to the emotion.
The rhyme in it is really good and adds to the emotion.
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re: Undiscribable
8th Mar 2012 5:42am
Very close to home
8th Mar 2012 5:36am
I'm basically watching my grandparents undergo this situation. They're both alive now, but my grandpa is basically terminal. And my grandmother literally just fell. She seems to be ok now, but that could have ended their waning independant lives.
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re: Very close to home
8th Mar 2012 5:43am
T-T
8th Mar 2012 5:43am
cute
8th Mar 2012 8:31am
re: cute
8th Mar 2012 8:33pm
hmmm.......
8th Mar 2012 8:05pm
re: hmmm.......
8th Mar 2012 8:32pm
Amazing piece
Anonymous
9th Mar 2012 1:04am
Very amazing poem. I loved reading it :)
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re: Amazing piece
10th Mar 2012 7:27am
re: WoW
10th Mar 2012 7:27am
re: re: re: great
11th Mar 2012 9:57pm
death
23rd Mar 2012 11:16am
This was so beautiful,I just lost my mother on the 13 of Jan.,and this brought back some memories and tears...Great work.
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re: death
23rd Mar 2012 7:47pm
re: death
1st Apr 2012 9:43pm
Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:45am
26th Jan 2013 6:56am
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