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listen to the silence
we have to hide behind ourselves
truth is a hard pill to swallow
most will definitely choke on it
spew some lame excuse
twisting a tornado of denial
sometimes she hates words
words that hold venom
in the most unexpected scenarios
that's someone's truth
doesn't have to be hers
her silence doesn't mean
she didn't hear it
she won't forget about it
silence is in fact
an answer
truth is a hard pill to swallow
most will definitely choke on it
spew some lame excuse
twisting a tornado of denial
sometimes she hates words
words that hold venom
in the most unexpected scenarios
that's someone's truth
doesn't have to be hers
her silence doesn't mean
she didn't hear it
she won't forget about it
silence is in fact
an answer
Published 8th Jan 2022
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8th Jan 2022 8:17pm
6th Feb 2022 7:42pm
Thank you so much particles_Of_Herll for your impactful comments .. very much appreciated
Humbled and honored by the taking
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JeJe
Humbled and honored by the taking
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JeJe
8th Jan 2022 11:58pm
Soulful and honest write, Jem.
I love your straightforwardness.
hugs,
buddhakitty
I love your straightforwardness.
hugs,
buddhakitty
6th Feb 2022 7:45pm
Thank you so much buddhakitty for your soulful comments and presence.. always appreciated
Humbled and honored by your taking
My apologies for my late response ...
🦋
JeJe
Humbled and honored by your taking
My apologies for my late response ...
🦋
JeJe
9th Jan 2022 4:51pm
True, I agree...
Silence is an answer...
I can really relate,
I have this tendency of keeping quiet and not respond when someone says something to me (especially one's that I find offensive or hard to digest)
Superb ink
This I dig
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Silence is an answer...
I can really relate,
I have this tendency of keeping quiet and not respond when someone says something to me (especially one's that I find offensive or hard to digest)
Superb ink
This I dig
-22
6th Feb 2022 7:48pm
Thank you so much poetOftragedy for your superb comments and presence .. very much appreciated.. it's always nice to know we are not alone .. here's to raising our voices !!
🦋
JeJe
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JeJe
9th Jan 2022 8:06pm
Wow, straight up and really relevant to my own life, probably to just about anyones.
Thank you so much Daniel for your relevant comments and presence .. always appreciated
My apologies for my late response
🦋
JeJe
My apologies for my late response
🦋
JeJe
11th Jan 2022 4:29am
Dear J,
I echo Daniel’s response. This is a stunning poem that really speaks directly to human call and response be it with words or the action of silence. Pierces the soul this write. Lovely. H🌷
I echo Daniel’s response. This is a stunning poem that really speaks directly to human call and response be it with words or the action of silence. Pierces the soul this write. Lovely. H🌷
6th Feb 2022 7:52pm
Dear H🌹
Thank you so much for your stunning comments and presence .. always appreciated
Humbled and honored by your taking
My apologies for my late response
🦋
JeJe
Thank you so much for your stunning comments and presence .. always appreciated
Humbled and honored by your taking
My apologies for my late response
🦋
JeJe
21st Jan 2022 6:45pm
6th Feb 2022 7:54pm
Thank you so much Josh for your powerful comments that ring true .. and your presence.. always appreciated
Humbled and honored by your taking
My apologies for my late response
🦋
JeJe
Humbled and honored by your taking
My apologies for my late response
🦋
JeJe
10th Apr 2022 6:47pm
silence is so pertinent to be deeply felt as the right response when words seem all so banal at times.
nice thoughts. enjoyed it very much.
nice thoughts. enjoyed it very much.
11th Apr 2022 2:14pm
Thank you so much to_be_me for your thoughtful comments .. very much appreciated
🌼🦋🌼
JeJe
🌼🦋🌼
JeJe
