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Regurgitated drivel not so cleverly disguised in rearranged formats, different words-
same meaning.
Love, Loss, Loneliness, Repeat.
Establishment has its drawbacks. There is nothing new to lament, or rejoice. It’s all been done.
admiration, adoration, atonement. redemption.
I’m
bored.
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5th Jan 2022 10:05am
Hiya H
I absolutely love the last line, got a good laugh out of that.
Your poem is delicious, I devoured the non-drivel with gusto and looked for more.
Please Sir, may I have some more?
Lovely read
💜💜💜💜
I absolutely love the last line, got a good laugh out of that.
Your poem is delicious, I devoured the non-drivel with gusto and looked for more.
Please Sir, may I have some more?
Lovely read
💜💜💜💜
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6th Jan 2022 12:01pm
Dear W,
Why thank you, kind sir. I’m pleased you enjoyed. I greatly appreciate your read and lovely comment. Stay tuned…if it’s more apathy you want…I can deliver. 😉
Thank you again. H🌷
Why thank you, kind sir. I’m pleased you enjoyed. I greatly appreciate your read and lovely comment. Stay tuned…if it’s more apathy you want…I can deliver. 😉
Thank you again. H🌷
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5th Jan 2022 10:19am
Hey H... so relatable... great job with this... really like the layout... great use of line breaks... draws the poem out... so the feeling resonate...
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6th Jan 2022 12:05pm
Dear L,
Thank you very much, I’m very grateful for this observation regarding layout. I know how it sounds in my head but it’s a crapshoot on how someone else will read it. Thank you again! H🌷
Thank you very much, I’m very grateful for this observation regarding layout. I know how it sounds in my head but it’s a crapshoot on how someone else will read it. Thank you again! H🌷
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2022 12:44pm
It's okay to write about things one is knowledeable in, but at some point it does start to feel like one had exhausted all metaphors on the subject.
What helps is a push come to shove. Remember, NaPoWriMo is soon upon us. A chance to get out of your head and into another's. New perspectives and adventures can come from pretending you are someone else.
What helps is a push come to shove. Remember, NaPoWriMo is soon upon us. A chance to get out of your head and into another's. New perspectives and adventures can come from pretending you are someone else.
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6th Jan 2022 12:08pm
Dear JB,
Good point, pretending I’m someone else…my next write will be from the perspective of Marie Antoinette. Mmmm maybe not…
As always, thank you for your kind support and terrific observations.
H🌷
Good point, pretending I’m someone else…my next write will be from the perspective of Marie Antoinette. Mmmm maybe not…
As always, thank you for your kind support and terrific observations.
H🌷
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5th Jan 2022 2:33pm
Well, most of us are mired in something. It's hard to shake that shit loose, but we keep trying.
So it sounds like the same old song because it is.
Still, once in a while one catches a breath of fresh air, and it's worth the effort.
Enjoyed this.
J.
So it sounds like the same old song because it is.
Still, once in a while one catches a breath of fresh air, and it's worth the effort.
Enjoyed this.
J.
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6th Jan 2022 12:13pm
Dear J,
Mired in something…so very true!! And mire is a choke hold when you feel like it won’t end. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment. It’s made my day. H🌷
Mired in something…so very true!! And mire is a choke hold when you feel like it won’t end. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment. It’s made my day. H🌷
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5th Jan 2022 3:09pm
I hear ya H
I've got writer's block a go go
Even I am sick of my own writing
BIG LIKE
I've got writer's block a go go
Even I am sick of my own writing
BIG LIKE
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6th Jan 2022 12:17pm
Dear PS,
Well, no wonder! You’re in the wrong place! You need to be at Whiskey a go go! You might be sick of your writes but we aren’t, so get cracking’!
Thank you so much for this fab comment. H🌷
Well, no wonder! You’re in the wrong place! You need to be at Whiskey a go go! You might be sick of your writes but we aren’t, so get cracking’!
Thank you so much for this fab comment. H🌷
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5th Jan 2022 4:03pm
Dearest, Honoria
Wow! Wow! Wow! you and me both. I think this is precisely why I haven't written much lately for waning passion regarding just about everything. I believe that passion still exists in this space so this year I will be present more often and concentrate on passionate things.
Thank you for putting a voice to my malaise.
Bravisima my dear companion in the struggle.🌹💖
XXOO,
Bobby
Wow! Wow! Wow! you and me both. I think this is precisely why I haven't written much lately for waning passion regarding just about everything. I believe that passion still exists in this space so this year I will be present more often and concentrate on passionate things.
Thank you for putting a voice to my malaise.
Bravisima my dear companion in the struggle.🌹💖
XXOO,
Bobby
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6th Jan 2022 12:19pm
Dear GW,
The best news ever! You’ll be on site more! Finally! This will surely provide the necessary passion to ignite more awesome poems from you! 😊
Thank you for this lovely comment. It’s brightened my day considerably.
Xx H🌷
The best news ever! You’ll be on site more! Finally! This will surely provide the necessary passion to ignite more awesome poems from you! 😊
Thank you for this lovely comment. It’s brightened my day considerably.
Xx H🌷
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6th Jan 2022 00:39am
Oh YES, me too, sister! SO bored with myself and my same stupid petty (or even serious) problems and themes. I can't write anything any more because it all just disgusts me. You seem to have managed to tap into my own malaise and make it into something lovely and relatable though. Bravo!!
❤k
❤k
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6th Jan 2022 12:23pm
Dear K,
Phew! I’m so glad you weren’t annoyed with me for busting into your head like this 😊
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment to validate my frustration. I was thinking my next poem might be about baking. Yeah right! I’m laughing out loud on that too! Xx
H🌷
Phew! I’m so glad you weren’t annoyed with me for busting into your head like this 😊
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment to validate my frustration. I was thinking my next poem might be about baking. Yeah right! I’m laughing out loud on that too! Xx
H🌷
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Dear H,
Your wise and sage words have echoed around in my head ever since I've first read them a few days ago— as I feel so lackluster and totally dulled, myself. I took a few days to reply because I wanted to see if I was able to get motivated or inspired by something that didn't feel so completely derivative of my 'typical usual'.... Well, I can say I've started to learned just how freaking difficult it is to lose the 'self blahs', while still trying to stay pumped and motivated to find a new 'freshness'....
The search continues.... ha!!
I deeply thank for sharing with us. Your open and truthful sentiments are super examples of a rejuvenation to a writing impetus!!
Ironic but so, so true!! 👍🏻
It's always a true pleasure to read your work, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Your wise and sage words have echoed around in my head ever since I've first read them a few days ago— as I feel so lackluster and totally dulled, myself. I took a few days to reply because I wanted to see if I was able to get motivated or inspired by something that didn't feel so completely derivative of my 'typical usual'.... Well, I can say I've started to learned just how freaking difficult it is to lose the 'self blahs', while still trying to stay pumped and motivated to find a new 'freshness'....
The search continues.... ha!!
I deeply thank for sharing with us. Your open and truthful sentiments are super examples of a rejuvenation to a writing impetus!!
Ironic but so, so true!! 👍🏻
It's always a true pleasure to read your work, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
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8th Jan 2022 8:36am
Dear BV,
The “self blahs” are the pits. Everything just feels so grimy in this state. And I can totally relate to trying to be “up” for all else when it’s the last thing you really feel. But! I think there’s a tide turning and we’re going to catch that wave with gusto!
New enthusiastic poems are on the way. We’re just letting them get organized. Thank you so much for your lovely comment and support. This is what helps my world go round😊x
Thank you! H🌷
The “self blahs” are the pits. Everything just feels so grimy in this state. And I can totally relate to trying to be “up” for all else when it’s the last thing you really feel. But! I think there’s a tide turning and we’re going to catch that wave with gusto!
New enthusiastic poems are on the way. We’re just letting them get organized. Thank you so much for your lovely comment and support. This is what helps my world go round😊x
Thank you! H🌷
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Anonymous
8th Jan 2022 2:12am
Hey H……around and around it goes……continues to always go back to where we left our broken souls……just to break us again…….emotional to have read…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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8th Jan 2022 8:40am
Dear FG,
Right?! It’s zany zoo out here! Some days I think there’s success and others it’s just a wasteland of heartbreak. Alas.. Thank you so much for sending some of that purple love, it helps ease the pain. X H🌷
Right?! It’s zany zoo out here! Some days I think there’s success and others it’s just a wasteland of heartbreak. Alas.. Thank you so much for sending some of that purple love, it helps ease the pain. X H🌷
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11th Jan 2022 1:13am
Good points raised. I can relate to this, Honoria. I think, change the angle slightly (or the structure) but continue regardless.
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Dear L,
You’re entirely into something here. Move a muscle change a thought and inevitably there’s a different POV. But carry on is the absolute must do. Got to keep going. I really appreciate being in solidarity here. Thank you for your wonderful comments and support. H🌷
You’re entirely into something here. Move a muscle change a thought and inevitably there’s a different POV. But carry on is the absolute must do. Got to keep going. I really appreciate being in solidarity here. Thank you for your wonderful comments and support. H🌷
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11th Jan 2022 3:15am
Damn gerbils.
I once caught an injured (wild) dove on the way to school. My teacher put it in the huge cage that only had a gerbil in it. There were branches and such for the dove to perch upon ,etc.
In the morning, upon getting to class, we discovered that the dove had not only killed the gerbil, but literally shredded it. The teacher promptly took the killer bird outside and let it go, injured wing or not. Lol.
At least it wasn't boring huh!
Good to see you posting some of your stuff!
I once caught an injured (wild) dove on the way to school. My teacher put it in the huge cage that only had a gerbil in it. There were branches and such for the dove to perch upon ,etc.
In the morning, upon getting to class, we discovered that the dove had not only killed the gerbil, but literally shredded it. The teacher promptly took the killer bird outside and let it go, injured wing or not. Lol.
At least it wasn't boring huh!
Good to see you posting some of your stuff!
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11th Jan 2022 4:25am
Dead S,
So the moral of the story is don’t bring an injured bird to that teacher. 😊
Nope, no boring story there my friend. Very interesting intel on wild doves. Gruesome but interesting. 😉
Always a pleasure to have you visit my humble pages. Thank you. H🌷
So the moral of the story is don’t bring an injured bird to that teacher. 😊
Nope, no boring story there my friend. Very interesting intel on wild doves. Gruesome but interesting. 😉
Always a pleasure to have you visit my humble pages. Thank you. H🌷
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11th Jan 2022 2:16pm
That’s the power of language, the idea can be conveyed in so many ways. I often worry I’m repeating myself and then it’s a challenge to find new approaches.
Excellent spill
Excellent spill
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13th Jan 2022 4:35am
Dear W,
Honestly, I don’t think anything I’ve ever read of yours is repetition. You’ve always managed preen get new and different material. But I sure appreciate your comment and the challenge of finding different ways to approach a topic. Thank you so much for your lovely response. It is always such a pleasure to see you.
H🌷
Honestly, I don’t think anything I’ve ever read of yours is repetition. You’ve always managed preen get new and different material. But I sure appreciate your comment and the challenge of finding different ways to approach a topic. Thank you so much for your lovely response. It is always such a pleasure to see you.
H🌷
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12th Jan 2022 10:04pm
Hi H., thanks for the poem. Writing can be an antidote to apathy. Just putting it out there takes courage. It’s worth it to see what’s new in an old routine. That’s the challenge.
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13th Jan 2022 4:38am
Dear PC,
I really like the idea of seeing what’s new in an old routine. What a cool way to rethink something. Thank you very much for your read and insightful comment. I really appreciate that. H🌷
I really like the idea of seeing what’s new in an old routine. What a cool way to rethink something. Thank you very much for your read and insightful comment. I really appreciate that. H🌷
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16th Jan 2022 12:55pm
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16th Jan 2022 8:36pm
Dear M,
Thank you! I’m extremely touched by your thoughtful and kind reply. I’m so pleased you dig it. 😊
Thank you. H🌷
Thank you! I’m extremely touched by your thoughtful and kind reply. I’m so pleased you dig it. 😊
Thank you. H🌷
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Deaf H,
I love the genuineness of this well penned poem of yours. It is also very relatable and universally felt I'm sure. You have such a gift for writing such wonderfully honest and meaningful spills. I have really missed reading you!
I love the genuineness of this well penned poem of yours. It is also very relatable and universally felt I'm sure. You have such a gift for writing such wonderfully honest and meaningful spills. I have really missed reading you!
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24th Jan 2022 7:43pm
Dear FM,
There you are! It’s been too long. Thank you for this boost of kindness. I’m so happy to see you and so humbled by this lovely response. Thank you. H🌷
There you are! It’s been too long. Thank you for this boost of kindness. I’m so happy to see you and so humbled by this lovely response. Thank you. H🌷
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24th Jan 2022 10:35pm
You're very welcome! It's a praiseworthy poem and we'll deserving of the wonderful remarks of your fellow poets. You're so good!
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25th Jan 2022 4:18am
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26th Jan 2022 11:26am
Dear R,
😂 “ Stank it UP”
Hey, man! A girl’s gotta do what a girl’s gotta do! And the gerbil’s were asking for it.
Mom…yeah, I know…I’m so screwed…and not in the good way!
(Thanks for the kick. I will get my hippie on 😊. I think that’s exactly what I need to do. H🌷)
😂 “ Stank it UP”
Hey, man! A girl’s gotta do what a girl’s gotta do! And the gerbil’s were asking for it.
Mom…yeah, I know…I’m so screwed…and not in the good way!
(Thanks for the kick. I will get my hippie on 😊. I think that’s exactly what I need to do. H🌷)
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11th Mar 2022 3:17am
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12th Mar 2022 2:24am
Dear R,
I totally get it. These topics sometimes just feel so worn out and impossible to create from, then we strike poetic hold and for a few magic moments we write. Wish it was more consistent. Alas. I really appreciate your read and thoughtful comment. I’m very honored by the RL add. Thank you very much. H🌷
I totally get it. These topics sometimes just feel so worn out and impossible to create from, then we strike poetic hold and for a few magic moments we write. Wish it was more consistent. Alas. I really appreciate your read and thoughtful comment. I’m very honored by the RL add. Thank you very much. H🌷
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12th Jun 2022 4:12am
Totally agree H 🌷its been said and done many times ovah, ha writers block is deep, eeek! 😳
Hang in there sweetie
Jackie xoxox ♥️
Hang in there sweetie
Jackie xoxox ♥️
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12th Jun 2022 9:25am
Dear J,
Thank you always for your lovely support. I guess I can keep reinventing all my woes using different words. Or better yet, different languages. I think I’ll try one in pig Latin 😄xx
H🌷
Thank you always for your lovely support. I guess I can keep reinventing all my woes using different words. Or better yet, different languages. I think I’ll try one in pig Latin 😄xx
H🌷
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12th Jun 2022 4:28pm
Lmao!
Sometimes you just have to listen as poetry cannot be forced 😑 i find collecting words and reading helps to generate imagery thus creating poetry. Although I will confess some but not all of my best poetry comes forth when i have a few sips of brandy lol
You are one of the best writers i know, however you don’t allow yourself the credit.
Hugs you good woman
Jackie xoxoxo ♥️
Sometimes you just have to listen as poetry cannot be forced 😑 i find collecting words and reading helps to generate imagery thus creating poetry. Although I will confess some but not all of my best poetry comes forth when i have a few sips of brandy lol
You are one of the best writers i know, however you don’t allow yourself the credit.
Hugs you good woman
Jackie xoxoxo ♥️
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