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in the sacred halls of sorrow leave no footprints
hurtful words cut and I look at the blood loss
I look around me then down
it is my very own soul bleeding metaphors
sorrowful redemption when I swing wide
inside my soul I keen
tears of night's own ash
regret sears the pneuma marring it
we bear the wounds of this life
I wake on the morrow and walk on
it is for me to act as my morality says I should
schizo as I am marked
I make no excuses
my soul's own heart tells me when I am in the wrong
I reflect the wisdom of the stars
shining on humanity with truth
cynicism has no place with sadness
a cynical view will only promote more death of the being
arrogant hedonism speaks volumes
in the tomes of pain I am named
Published 29th Dec 2021
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29th Dec 2021 5:07pm
I look around me then down
it is my very own soul bleeding metaphors
I am hypersensitive about the hypersensitivity of others....though not enough about my own....irony is a passionate teacher....thank you for always keeping it real.
it is my very own soul bleeding metaphors
I am hypersensitive about the hypersensitivity of others....though not enough about my own....irony is a passionate teacher....thank you for always keeping it real.
29th Dec 2021 5:51pm
good morning dearest RT you know we can only write what we feel as we can only do what we feel down deep anything less than that is an act and really what's the point? thank you my friend for reading and commenting❤
29th Dec 2021 5:32pm
'arrogant hedonism speaks volumes '--powerful statiement!
I'm not familiar with pnema except as an acronym.
Did you mean pneuma?
Well done.
🙏🏼
I'm not familiar with pnema except as an acronym.
Did you mean pneuma?
Well done.
🙏🏼
29th Dec 2021 5:42pm
good morning dearest poet thank you for reading and leaving a thoughtful comment yes I meant pneuma it's an error I deeply appreciate your thoughts❤
29th Dec 2021 5:54pm
29th Dec 2021 5:59pm
hello dearest Robert yes it's when we don't follow that inner voice it's not for the better...thank you for reading and leaving a thoughtful comment❤
29th Dec 2021 10:02pm
And the respect continues on with the endless amount that I have for you and your poetic abilities, dear lady! To write what you mean with beautifully unique gumption, yet an undoubted soulfulness, all while remaining wholly and completely genuine is a true fantastic talent. I marvel and I'm extremely touched and appreciative of your voice.
Much love, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Much love, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
29th Dec 2021 11:05pm
good afternoon beautiful Blue what is so soulful is not me but the way you see me that really touches my heart... you are a gorgeous soul and artist...thank you for being so generous a soul with everyone here...they look to you I think and adore you...you shine lady❤ I thank you humbly...
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30th Dec 2021 11:48am
5th Jan 2022 6:38pm
I really dug some of the phrases here, like “soul bleeding metaphors “ and “sorrowful redemption “, but what really resonated with me here was the “ cynicism has no place with sadness” line, as if these two forces can only make certain things worse.
Outstanding spill
Outstanding spill
