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Galaxy of Poetry
They say it was
written in the stars
I say I want to
write with them
I want to fly up
on my magic carpet of
shimmering garnets
submerge my
vial of fingertips
with their
luminous essence
and write upon a
page of onyx so
smooth and black
my fingers just
glide along for
an imprinted ride
infinite black slate
each seared poem a
glimmering fingerprint
a dot of time
creating lines
and roadmaps
captured destinations
living liquid flotations
my space constellations
that won't dry or fade
but never to be lost
in its beauty
I will always find
my way back home
to my mother earth
where I will
spread my seeds
of ashen bone
nourishing a
flourishing of
lush rich grass
a strong foundation
for my future
dynasty generations
to gaze upon and read
my Galaxy of Poetry
written in the stars
I say I want to
write with them
I want to fly up
on my magic carpet of
shimmering garnets
submerge my
vial of fingertips
with their
luminous essence
and write upon a
page of onyx so
smooth and black
my fingers just
glide along for
an imprinted ride
infinite black slate
each seared poem a
glimmering fingerprint
a dot of time
creating lines
and roadmaps
captured destinations
living liquid flotations
my space constellations
that won't dry or fade
but never to be lost
in its beauty
I will always find
my way back home
to my mother earth
where I will
spread my seeds
of ashen bone
nourishing a
flourishing of
lush rich grass
a strong foundation
for my future
dynasty generations
to gaze upon and read
my Galaxy of Poetry
Author's Note
Listening to The Black Keys - Little Black Submarines
Where to start with this song. It inspired everything with this write. It subliminally sent me messages for my other work.
"the voices calling me
they get lost and out of time"
My other projects are calling.
Characters are waiting. Tired of being put in the back of my mind waiting on me to flesh them out. I need to get in that submarine and submerge into an ocean of words and treasure hunt. I'm being patched back into my mind by the submarine operator and being told to get back to work:)
Too many people in my head to hop back and forth.
Gotta focus and get ready for upcoming competitions.
I will miss everyone!!
My last poem- I'll be returning summer 2022. (hopefully)
Later Gators!
Where to start with this song. It inspired everything with this write. It subliminally sent me messages for my other work.
"the voices calling me
they get lost and out of time"
My other projects are calling.
Characters are waiting. Tired of being put in the back of my mind waiting on me to flesh them out. I need to get in that submarine and submerge into an ocean of words and treasure hunt. I'm being patched back into my mind by the submarine operator and being told to get back to work:)
Too many people in my head to hop back and forth.
Gotta focus and get ready for upcoming competitions.
I will miss everyone!!
My last poem- I'll be returning summer 2022. (hopefully)
Later Gators!
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
25th Dec 2021 4:58am
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27th Dec 2021 10:53pm
Re. Galaxy of Poetry
25th Dec 2021 11:46am
Righteous drumbeat pr poetry as always
You have a way of telling your gospel
BIG LIKE
You have a way of telling your gospel
BIG LIKE
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27th Dec 2021 10:54pm
Hey PS!!
Just could not leave anyone hanging:)
Thanks for the RL amigo!!!
Be seeing ya around.
Just could not leave anyone hanging:)
Thanks for the RL amigo!!!
Be seeing ya around.
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Gorgeously crafted, A
Seems you're leaving on a brilliant high note with such a terrifically penned exit! Well done! I hope you're able to accomplish much and go far, focusing on what needs it most. Have a great new year full of possibilities, prosperity and joy! ✨
See ya round the summer swimming hole in '22!
It's been a pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
Seems you're leaving on a brilliant high note with such a terrifically penned exit! Well done! I hope you're able to accomplish much and go far, focusing on what needs it most. Have a great new year full of possibilities, prosperity and joy! ✨
See ya round the summer swimming hole in '22!
It's been a pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
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Hi B
Just couldn't leave without a proper thank you for your lovely comment on my work:)
I will be working my ass off this New Year Amiga:)!!!
See ya around:)
Just couldn't leave without a proper thank you for your lovely comment on my work:)
I will be working my ass off this New Year Amiga:)!!!
See ya around:)
Re. Galaxy of Poetry
25th Dec 2021 4:56pm
Re: Re. Galaxy of Poetry
27th Dec 2021 10:57pm
Hey Tim
I am on her coattails amigo:)
Couldn't leave your comment hanging:)
thank you!!
I am on her coattails amigo:)
Couldn't leave your comment hanging:)
thank you!!
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Anonymous
25th Dec 2021 5:10pm
Awe Angel…….you will be greatly missed……it’s been a blessing to have our life paths cross…….may many blessing be with you…….see ya again soon……..purple luv & hugs xo :)
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27th Dec 2021 10:58pm
I'll be back when I am finished with my project.
Just couldn't leave without thanking you for your amazing comment!!
See ya in the summer:)
Just couldn't leave without thanking you for your amazing comment!!
See ya in the summer:)
Re. Galaxy of Poetry
25th Dec 2021 5:32pm
Dear A,
Soar far and high. I look forward to your return whereupon you can regale us with your successes through your amazing poems. All the very best. Merry Christmas.
H🌷
Soar far and high. I look forward to your return whereupon you can regale us with your successes through your amazing poems. All the very best. Merry Christmas.
H🌷
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27th Dec 2021 11:00pm
Hey H!!
Thank you amiga. I will be back when all is written and done:)
I will definitely be seeing you around amiga.
Couldn't leave without responding to your comment.
Thank you amiga. I will be back when all is written and done:)
I will definitely be seeing you around amiga.
Couldn't leave without responding to your comment.
Re. Galaxy of Poetry
25th Dec 2021 9:03pm
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27th Dec 2021 11:01pm
Hi N!
Thank you so much. You are amazing so I had to respond to the comment:)
Thank you so much. You are amazing so I had to respond to the comment:)
Re. Galaxy of Poetry
27th Dec 2021 10:30pm
YOu are an amazing poet; she is a great and thought-provoking write. Hugs and peace, Oral (o)-(o)
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27th Dec 2021 11:02pm
Hey O!!
I'm so excited you left a comment. Glad you enjoyed:)
Couldn't leave your amazing comment hanging.
Thank you so much!!!
I'm so excited you left a comment. Glad you enjoyed:)
Couldn't leave your amazing comment hanging.
Thank you so much!!!
Re. Galaxy of Poetry
27th Dec 2021 11:39pm
Fantastic write... great flow... excellent line breaks... love all of the alliteration... especially the flow of "l"s
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28th Dec 2021 3:13am
Hey LIlD
Thank you so much. Honestly, I try my hardest to find constellations but could never quite find the Dig Dipper, So I figured I'd write my own. LOL
Have a great New Year!!!
Thank you so much. Honestly, I try my hardest to find constellations but could never quite find the Dig Dipper, So I figured I'd write my own. LOL
Have a great New Year!!!
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
29th Dec 2021 3:59pm
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30th Dec 2021 1:52am
Hey You:)
It was more like a vision. When I hear music sometimes pictures flash in my mind. Sometimes I just pick a topic and put a variety of music on. When I feel a connection with a certain song I just keep it on repeat and let my mind go. Just with poetry though. My other stuff I need to be alone and really tune in to what I'm writing. Love that I put a video in your mind mister:) This comment made me smile and so glad you stopped in for a comment. Means a lot.
You as well are an amazing writer yourself with a great sense of humor. So glad you enjoyed!
Thanks for all of your comments on my stuff!!!
It was more like a vision. When I hear music sometimes pictures flash in my mind. Sometimes I just pick a topic and put a variety of music on. When I feel a connection with a certain song I just keep it on repeat and let my mind go. Just with poetry though. My other stuff I need to be alone and really tune in to what I'm writing. Love that I put a video in your mind mister:) This comment made me smile and so glad you stopped in for a comment. Means a lot.
You as well are an amazing writer yourself with a great sense of humor. So glad you enjoyed!
Thanks for all of your comments on my stuff!!!
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
30th Dec 2021 1:54am
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Re. Galaxy of Poetry
20th Jan 2022 2:09am
This was incredible. I wish I could write long poems like this. But anyways this is really good and I hope all of your other works are just as enjoyable.
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21st Jan 2022 00:15am
Thank you so much Casa_Nova.
What a lovely comment.
Can't wait to read yours too!
Welcome to DUP:)
What a lovely comment.
Can't wait to read yours too!
Welcome to DUP:)