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Re. Survival Mode
23rd Dec 2021 10:28pm
Very striking imagery with some powerfully poignant poetry! (I swear the alliteration was a total accident..)
Great ink, Walter!
Good luck in the comp
🌹 - B
Great ink, Walter!
Good luck in the comp
🌹 - B
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Re: Re. Survival Mode
31st Dec 2021 1:53am
Thank you so much for your comment and RL Blue.
There were more shocking photos and sceneries, but this one came close. I was about that boy's age when I left and I had a very similar shirt like that. It certainly brought me back many memories.
There were more shocking photos and sceneries, but this one came close. I was about that boy's age when I left and I had a very similar shirt like that. It certainly brought me back many memories.
Re. Survival Mode
25th Dec 2021 5:10pm
How much do we overlook so we can enjoy the sunshine and our breakfast cereals. I wonder at people who invite the weight of the world to crush them. I hear you.
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Re: Re. Survival Mode
31st Dec 2021 1:56am
Daniel! Great to hear from you. Thanks for commenting.
Yes, we can have peace of mind now, but thinking about those in need, especially those who are suffering around the world, it can certainly break people's heart.
Hope you had a great Christmas and have a Happy New Years!
Yes, we can have peace of mind now, but thinking about those in need, especially those who are suffering around the world, it can certainly break people's heart.
Hope you had a great Christmas and have a Happy New Years!
Re: Re. Survival Mode
9th Jan 2022 3:52pm
It was mostly quiet brother but that is a blessing as well. My brother came for a brief visit, my elderly mother had a serious panic attack. In life our joys and sorrows are always intertwined I guess. I hope the new year is one of more joy than sorrow for you.
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Re. Survival Mode
26th Dec 2021 00:38am
Damn straight, Wally. This is a very powerful poem and visual. Best of luck in the comp!
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Re: Re. Survival Mode
31st Dec 2021 1:57am
Thank you very much Ahavati (and for the RL as well).
Something about this boy connected with me.
Hope you had a great Christmas and have a Happy New Years!
Something about this boy connected with me.
Hope you had a great Christmas and have a Happy New Years!
Re. Survival Mode
Anonymous
28th Dec 2021 6:24pm
Some great entries in the comp, but yours owned it. Amazing combination of words and imagery.
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Re: Re. Survival Mode
31st Dec 2021 1:58am
JB, thank you once again (and for the RL addition).
Sometimes those images speak volumes. I just added my two cents.
Sometimes those images speak volumes. I just added my two cents.
Re. Survival Mode
30th Dec 2021 00:36am
Re: Re. Survival Mode
31st Dec 2021 1:59am
CF, thank you so much (and for the RL addition).
It's always great to hear from you.
It's always great to hear from you.