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Getting My Attention
When a man’s not full of bluster
Or flaunting his macho stuff
I find that tender words and deeds
For me are quite enough
I sometimes seek unlikely souls
In men that make me swoon
I like the shock upon their face
When I say it’s time to spoon
Or flaunting his macho stuff
I find that tender words and deeds
For me are quite enough
I sometimes seek unlikely souls
In men that make me swoon
I like the shock upon their face
When I say it’s time to spoon
Published 12th Dec 2021
Author's Note
Sometimes it's fun to surprise an unsuspecting man.
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12th Dec 2021 1:15pm
Depends what his immediate definition of 'spoon' is!
I am all for practising the tender words and deeds stuff too.
I am all for practising the tender words and deeds stuff too.
13th Dec 2021 1:21am
15th Dec 2021 4:32pm
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13th Dec 2021 10:57pm
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15th Dec 2021 4:31pm
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. To make the issue more complicated for men, some women (like me) respond to different things in different men.
14th Dec 2021 4:13am
18th Dec 2021 11:58am
This is great... wonderful flow... genuine... authentic... well penned...
22nd Dec 2021 11:39am
2nd Jan 2022 7:29pm
It took me a while to realize much easier to make a simple connection by talking to the opposite sex, than showing off my bravado.
Enjoyed your poem, a valuable lesson indeed.
Enjoyed your poem, a valuable lesson indeed.
6th Sep 2022 11:04pm
Sometimes keeping it short and simple is more than enough for a man.
Yes, there's no need for the bedroom when you're not in the mood for it.
When you just want the person near you, holding each other, can bring you closer than when you are naked.
Yes, there's no need for the bedroom when you're not in the mood for it.
When you just want the person near you, holding each other, can bring you closer than when you are naked.
