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The need in me
I touch you in the mirror
you perspire a liquid dream
I bathe in the waters of time
when the moonlight is high
We dive into the seduction of love
I have visions of you and I
The light filters into our destiny
I want to touch you until the sun rises
Let's forget about tomorrow
I just want to be with you
you perspire a liquid dream
I bathe in the waters of time
when the moonlight is high
We dive into the seduction of love
I have visions of you and I
The light filters into our destiny
I want to touch you until the sun rises
Let's forget about tomorrow
I just want to be with you
Published 10th Dec 2021
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10th Dec 2021 11:11pm
11th Dec 2021 00:37am
Thank you for your comments. It's a longing to be loved. Isn't that what we all crave?
12th Dec 2021 8:15pm
10th Dec 2021 11:33pm
11th Dec 2021 00:41am
Thanks. I scribbled some notes about the way I was feeling. There is passion within me, but I feel so alone sometimes. Like I've been abandoned.
11th Dec 2021 11:50am
Its alright to be able to feel the heart beat in your chest when it comes to your feelings of love for sometimes its a lonely place at times when you are alone and feel abandoned by love and affection and understanding we are only human with wants and needs and feelings 🙏👊👊👊
21st Dec 2021 1:13pm
👋 Hello Evocation! I guess love is in the air.*💕*Who told me that? Not sparrows!I understood from your magical words.
*🔮* This was a brilliant read. xo Isabella. ♡
*🔮* This was a brilliant read. xo Isabella. ♡
23rd Dec 2021 2:20pm
Thanks so much for your kind words. Love is out there, but it can easily slip through your fingers. I try to capture the essence of it through writing.
24th Dec 2021 6:05pm
Thanks for reading. I appreciate your comments and hope to be writing more in 2022.
25th Sep 2022 1:01am
"you perspire a liquid dream
I bathe in the waters of time"
I liked the visual emotional undertones in these lines, they feel modern and classical at the same time.
Well done.
I bathe in the waters of time"
I liked the visual emotional undertones in these lines, they feel modern and classical at the same time.
Well done.
