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Enlighten
I craved her like I craved my bourbon
two fingers deep and chill
nothing neat about it
dark, smoky, refined
originality, directing impurities of the mind
enhanced embrace of ether
lubricant of libation
wet lips confined
confirmed
secrets can't hide
scenes lain in the framework
primal needs here reside
in dark alleyways
under dream lit skies
aged moments abreast
the very hardened kind
succumbed to the stroke
of midnight
coming together outside
shadows fall to the pavement
clouds obscured in the moonlight
shaking, she's just a little bit tipsy
no stopping the enlightenment
there is more than enough time
two fingers deep and chill
nothing neat about it
dark, smoky, refined
originality, directing impurities of the mind
enhanced embrace of ether
lubricant of libation
wet lips confined
confirmed
secrets can't hide
scenes lain in the framework
primal needs here reside
in dark alleyways
under dream lit skies
aged moments abreast
the very hardened kind
succumbed to the stroke
of midnight
coming together outside
shadows fall to the pavement
clouds obscured in the moonlight
shaking, she's just a little bit tipsy
no stopping the enlightenment
there is more than enough time
Published 3rd Dec 2021
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3rd Dec 2021 8:56pm
3rd Dec 2021 8:58pm
4th Dec 2021 2:53am
4th Dec 2021 5:39pm
4th Dec 2021 11:35am
I believe in bourbon logic and have written a bit about it
Strong entry like the whiskey
BIG LIKE TIM
Strong entry like the whiskey
BIG LIKE TIM
4th Dec 2021 5:40pm
10th Dec 2021 9:42pm
I love the metaphors here... Feeling a bit tipsy from reading and I feel dark and refined so am I directing impurities to your mind? ;) There is so much one can do down a dark alleyway. 'obscured in the moonlight shaking' this definitely has conjured up so many images in my dirty mind. :)
10th Dec 2021 9:46pm
A dirty mind beckons dark alleyway delight... the impurities are what make us special... Thanks for your lovely dissection dearest Kristina xo
