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Senryu
THE WAY YOU MAKE ME FEEL
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THE WAY YOU MAKE ME FEEL
The shit is flying
At us sideways but somehow
All heaven breaks loose
Written by
SatInUGal
(Kumar)
Published
2nd Dec 2021
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